DNF: The Sharpshooter Begins in Zaun

Now I saw the marriage robbery, emmm, and then I saw the author saying that without a harem, a harem is equal to a stallion. . . The harem doesn't need to be studded! With so many female characters in Valoran, a few heroines should be enough, right? Fan fiction after all. . . . emmm, I'm just telling you my opinion. Please reply when the author sees it! Thank you

It's not that the author's writing is not good, but the author made a huge mistake, that is, forcibly weakening it, and the most important thing is that you wrote DNF to attract readers, and then forcibly weakened DNF. In the end, people from both League of Legends and DNF were offended, and neither of them was pleased. The most important thing is that the author of the power system didn't think it through at all at the beginning, which felt like a drama.

Magical girl Jinx, cute monster loli!

It's annoying to see that it's better to start from scratch when you get to full level and get slashed to the end. Also, is it possible that the sharpshooter who has cleared Arad has a body similar to that of an ordinary person? He can't even withstand bullets and poison. Is it possible that Arad, who cleared the level without taking any damage, never received a single shot from someone else's ultimate move during the battle? If the skills are sealed and the body becomes an ordinary person, then it is better to upgrade and obtain skills little by little. At least there is no poisonous point. After seeing half of it, I really feel all kinds of weird points. I can't help but complain.

The leader of the world, the sharpshooter who killed the Tyrannosaurus King, the genius who is proficient in ammunition, machinery, guns, and Wandering 4 professions. Give Carter the dagger. Really awesome

I have read Chapter 33. I like this book very much, but I am a little obsessed with the protagonist's strength. Anyone who is hit is 50-50, and everyone will be injured. If I am not strong enough, I feel that I can't dodge a bullet from a drunk policewoman. I feel that the positioning of character strength is not clear enough.

Damn it, I saw the third one and couldn't wait to post it. What did I see? Brass three stars. To be honest, readers who read lol fandoms should have read the background stories. We will all have a rough positioning of strength. In the world view, there is no rank. Why is this done? It is very confusing. It is like leveling up by killing monsters. The first LOL fanfic I ever read, Master Fa's League of Legends, The author didn't use rank, but wrote it directly, but the division of strength can be seen at a glance, who can beat whom. What brass, king, and master are used for player ranking? How can they exist in the LOL world? Will anyone give Galen a silver level of strength? This is just like writing DNF. Agan Zuo introduced himself and said, I am a level 59 sword master. How is that possible? In the same way, in the LOL world, how is it possible for Jinx to say that she is a brass star? She should say that she can blow up the police station in Pi City and steal the bank vault, right?

I hope it can pass the trial! This one is so pretty!

When I saw Chapter 20, the writing was good, but it was so weak. The protagonist felt really weak. How about your blocking skills when fighting Catherine? He was hit unexpectedly and was speechless. Later, when you released the Double Eagle Spin, you were hit in the back. Where was your revenge? Not to mention these are also sealed. . . There's nothing wrong with you writing like this. The key is that you boasted too much before. You're 18 years old and 4 years old. Are you using experience capsules to make money? Just this little combat experience? I suspect that you also participated in the war against the apostles. You just shot a headshot and ran away. . .

You might as well just set up a sharpshooter system. A person with four awakenings has nothing to say after being chopped like this.