DNF Sharpshooter Starts in Zaun

The author knight does not need to compare the strength of the background stories of DNF and LOL, because this is a sharpshooter profession. Although it is not like street fighting in the background, it is not as good as the kind that is related to the power of apostles or gods. Belongs to mid-range level.

Now I saw the marriage robbery, emmm, and then I saw the author saying that without a harem, a harem is equal to a stallion. . . The harem doesn't need to be studded! With so many female characters in Valoran, a few heroines should be enough, right? Fan fiction after all. . . . emmm, I'm just telling you my opinion. Please reply when the author sees it! Thank you

It's not that the author's writing is not good, but the author made a huge mistake, that is, forcibly weakening it, and the most important thing is that you wrote DNF to attract readers, and then forcibly weakened DNF. In the end, people from both League of Legends and DNF were offended, and neither of them was pleased. The most important thing is that the author of the power system didn't think it through at all at the beginning, which felt like a drama.

Magical girl Jinx, cute monster loli!

It's annoying to see that it's better to start from scratch when you get to full level and get slashed to the end. Also, is it possible that the sharpshooter who has cleared Arad has a body similar to that of an ordinary person? He can't even withstand bullets and poison. Is it possible that Arad, who cleared the level without taking any damage, never received a single shot from someone else's ultimate move during the battle? If the skills are sealed and the body becomes an ordinary person, then it is better to upgrade and obtain skills little by little. At least there is no poisonous point. After seeing half of it, I really feel all kinds of weird points. I can't help but complain.

The leader of the world, the sharpshooter who killed the Tyrannosaurus King, the genius who is proficient in ammunition, machinery, guns, and Wandering 4 professions. Give Carter the dagger. Really awesome

I have read Chapter 33. I like this book very much, but I am a little obsessed with the protagonist's strength. Anyone who is hit is 50-50, and everyone will be injured. If I am not strong enough, I feel that I can't dodge a bullet from a drunk policewoman. I feel that the positioning of character strength is not clear enough.

Damn it, I saw the third one and couldn't wait to post it. What did I see? Brass three stars. To be honest, readers who read lol fandoms should have read the background stories. We will all have a rough positioning of strength. In the world view, there is no rank. Why is this done? It is very confusing. It is like leveling up by killing monsters. The first LOL fanfic I ever read, Master Fa's League of Legends, The author didn't use rank, but wrote it directly, but the division of strength can be seen at a glance, who can beat whom. What brass, king, and master are used for player ranking? How can they exist in the LOL world? Will anyone give Galen a silver level of strength? This is just like writing DNF. Agan Zuo introduced himself and said, I am a level 59 sword master. How is that possible? In the same way, in the LOL world, how is it possible for Jinx to say that she is a brass star? She should say that she can blow up the police station in Pi City and steal the bank vault, right?

I hope it can pass the trial! This one is so pretty!

When I saw Chapter 20, the writing was good, but it was so weak. The protagonist felt really weak. How about your blocking skills when fighting Catherine? He was hit unexpectedly and was speechless. Later, when you released the Double Eagle Spin, you were hit in the back. Where was your revenge? Not to mention these are also sealed. . . There's nothing wrong with you writing like this. The key is that you boasted too much before. You're 18 years old and 4 years old. Are you using experience capsules to make money? Just this little combat experience? I suspect that you also participated in the war against the apostles. You just shot a headshot and ran away. . .

You might as well just set up a sharpshooter system. A person with four awakenings has nothing to say after being chopped like this.

NT plot: This policewoman is drunk too.

How about we kill Huang Maoz! Not strong either! It's useless to keep it! I always do CG and collaboration with my wives! Kill him!

The fourth one. . . . . . Tucao, the currency of Piltover is gold hex, not gold coins. Moreover, the policewoman was still working as a police officer until she was 21 years old, and there was no plot to get married. Furthermore, the policewoman was born into a family of mechanics and could be said to be rich and powerful, but her father was a Hex craftsman, not a politician. And what time period is it now? Can the author give you a firm belief that the Evolution Day event happened one year ago? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

A max-level roaming, sharpshooter who can kill the Tyrannosaurus King, actually gets injured first by everyone he encounters, and can even get scratches on his body with a knife.

Jk style, little instructor Jinx

First of all, I am not saying how high I think my literary literacy is, I am just saying a few words. I have been reading novels for about 10 years, covering various themes. I just want to give a brief review of this novel. If you don't like it, don't read it. I read Chapter 50, and my first impression is that the setting is too vague. First of all, you didn't tell me whether the protagonist would have a system after traveling to DNF or something like that. The author may have just looked at the setting collection of DNF without considering the real situation. Normally speaking, except for mechanics, other gunner professions do not have time-travel devices to store things. Like quantum blast bombs from big guns, those things normally call for air support or long-range strikes. The game is in the game, and the reality after time travel is reality. Or maybe you said that in the DNF world view, everyone is just like the game, calling bombs casually, that's fine, but you didn't say that. So your professional skills as a gunner are quite bizarre. And there is no need to forcibly add an indicator crosshair for quantum bombs... How silly... The second point is the strength that many people complain about. This is true I can understand that the author wanted to make the heroes of Valoran less rubbish and deliberately weakened the protagonist's strength, but I think this is a bit superfluous. Either way, don't write a protagonist who is so awesome. He has 4 professions and 2 sleeps + cleared the apostle battle. 4What is the normal concept of having second sleep in a career? It's a small case of one person becoming an army, what about satellite rays, chrono-space march, seventh wing movement, it's really outrageous to be injured by Urgot, and even if your strength is sealed, your fighting consciousness and fighting literacy are still there, right? Can't interrupt Urgot before he takes action? Can this be called the Wings of Skittering the Sky? Either don't write so awesome, or control your setting and write a protagonist whose skills are sealed but is still awesome. What you are doing now is neither good nor bad, which is very embarrassing. Also, the author may not have any idea about firearms, or the lethality of modern weapons. I've thrown quantum bombs several times and nothing happened. Even though the learning level of this thing is not high in the game, it should be a big killer in reality. Let's compare it with the actual cloud explosion bomb. The small-yield killing range is also 50 square meters, and the larger one is 200 square meters. What is the concept of this thing? Within the killing range, it will either be shocked to death, burned to death, or suffocated to death. You, the quantum bomb, have no appearance at all. You were blocked by Ryze at the beginning. Okay, your archmage is awesome. You were not hurt when your own little robot blew up from the sky? Normally, except for a few people in Pi City who can block it, everyone else will die if they eat it. After the explosion, there is not just a mushroom cloud for you to see. Where did the fragments, shock waves, heat, and radiation produced by the explosion go? With your initial settings, most lol heroes cannot beat you, except for some super settings (Dragon King) (Japanese Girl) and so on. There is no need to forcefully lower your strength in order to interact with heroes. I think the rest is just okay, so I won't go into details. Generally speaking, I hope the author can explain his setting clearly and think about the strength comparison between the two worldviews. I give you a recommendation vote and hope you can write better and better.

I think it's not sharp enough, it should be stripped instead of sealed 🤫 They are all vegetables anyway, and everyone will be hit at 55 points.

I was too poisoned and went to the hospital for emergency treatment.

After reading 14 pictures, how did the protagonist survive the DNF? Is it possible that he was always dealing damage behind his teammates? With such a weak chicken body, if a big move comes over, it will be blown to death, or it will be crippled. The biggest poisonous point of this novel is the physical strength of the protagonist, but everything else is fine.

As the heroine, Jinx is so hungry that she doesn't choose food.

When I saw 36 pictures, I felt like I couldn't stand it anymore. It gave me the feeling that after Baby Xuxu dropped all of his boosting equipment and saw those boosts of 11 and 12, wow, man, the boosts are so high. This feeling. First of all, the protagonist's skills are only sealed. His physical fitness and combat instincts are not sealed. As a person at the top of the human pyramid, his temperament is not sealed. However, I don't find the calmness of a master. Instead, he is so stupid that his skills are useless after being sealed.

The author doesn't know if he has a mental breakdown or something else. Anyway, looking at the comments, you can feel his own pretentiousness. I feel that the books I wrote are not brainless and I am proud of them. Readers will criticize them when they point out their shortcomings. Emmmm~ He is considered brainless and unhappy. This definition should be easier for him to accept.

Ali

I have played DNF and League of Legends, but I have never played deeply. I have not played Awakening as a priest. I can only play Garen Swordmaster Xin Zhao on the Iron Sun account (no other skills) I often watch Lao Xu tell stories and have a general understanding of the League of Legends universe. The ceiling-level Dragon King can attack the strong ones in other universes (that is to say, it should be no problem for the Dragon King to travel through the heavens) I have no idea about DNF. I used to fight Goblins and Minotaurs every day.

It can be salty, sweet or salty, it's invincible when driving!

There is one thing I don't understand. According to Jinx's character, the policewoman should have gone crazy immediately after shooting the protagonist, but in the end, she was completely on the sidelines. It feels like the author doesn't understand Jinx.

I also give you a monthly pass. Hey, is it worth it to my fans?

🤓🤓 Keep up the good work, you will become a god

I'll give you a monthly pass, if you have any 🤭