The Road to the Great Emperor Starting from Douluo

I don't think it's very good to watch, and it makes people feel frustrated and panicked. Only the pig's feet are smart, the brother seems weak, Zhuqing is completely dependent, and the sister is even more brainless and willful. Anyway, it is very uncomfortable to watch. I insist on watching a lot. I feel that the plot is too mysterious and always keeps people's appetite. It doesn't let people fully know what the plot is. Well, I don't know how you feel about it. Anyway, I have read a lot, and I have no desire to pay to continue reading. This book cannot be used as a source of entertainment, and it is not meant to belittle this book. I must be persistent in writing so much. Come on, author, and give me some suggestions by the way. The main characters are supporting characters. The characters should not appear to be obvious. How can I put it? Let's call it a righteous character. If there are particularly prominent disgusting points and no other outstanding character shining points, it is easy for people to feel uncomfortable. The proportion of the two must be well coordinated. It is indeed difficult to unify the readers' tastes, but I Personally, I feel that some uncomfortable points can be avoided. The general direction of a book must be determined. The general direction here does not refer to the plot, but to whether the book is a silly and sweet novel, a decisive and murderous novel, or a fighting spirit, eerie and terrifying puzzle. Whatever the novel is, you must grasp the attractiveness of the novel, just like Fang said silly and sweet writing. According to my observation, reading this kind of writing pursues sweet fantasy and unique love excitement, so it is not so important to say whether it is reasonable or not. First, you must find an attractive point for your pig's feet. As far as your book is concerned, what kind of martial arts is not attractive? What is the name of this book? There are books with one more soul ring than yours. The martial soul in it is very interesting and attractive. And your multiple martial souls are not irreplaceable. You can change the golden dragon to the blue dragon or the sword. Let's not talk about anything else. Let's talk about the game space-like place. It is simply a hodgepodge, mixed together and delicious. You obviously didn't mix it well, your connection was very blunt, and you lacked a sense of connection... I can't finish it without saying it. I'm exhausted from typing. I'm just expressing my personal thoughts. Don't put any pressure on me. What will happen if you don't listen to me? I feel very disappointed if I don't say so much. Being able to say so much is a testament to what I've seen. Ming, if someone reads the book you wrote, it means that you have taken a small step towards success and are not far from a big step towards success. Come on, author. Finally, let's talk about the last one. You can read other people's books and look at your own. Compare and contrast. When you really realize your shortcomings, you will make progress. Come on, author＾0＾~

The protagonist is too miserable. His current soul power is not as high as Dai Mubai's. If I had encountered such a thing, I would have gone berserk. The protagonist's mentality is really good.

Be more focused when writing. In the original White Tiger Martial Spirit, you had to add a Golden Dragon Martial Spirit and create a powerful mother. If there was such a mother, how could the original Dai Mubai be so miserable?

I don't understand the author's thoughts. People hide their strength for a reason. They are afraid of being harmed or something. Do you have any idea about hiding your strength?

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If you want to write a fanfic, you should arrange cheats appropriately. If you overturn all the original settings, you can just create something new. It's poisonous. Just a word and I ordered a chapter, please

I can't understand. Too many inexplicable people have been added. It doesn't feel like Douluo at all. In the name of Douluo, I am writing a novel about cultivating immortals. I am speechless.

The male protagonist is useless. In the original work, he could do one versus two, but now he can only do one versus one.

If you look at the introduction and see the abusive master, you have no idea.

Zhu Zhuqing

An original novel about cultivating immortality by a sadistic master wearing Douluo skin.

This fandom is so depressing and not enjoyable at all. Some people just skip over the abuse of the protagonist, or they abuse the protagonist for a few years at the beginning and then become a genius. The author explains how to abuse the protagonist in detail.

To be added later,,,

In the original work, one man could fight many women, but now it can only be one man fight one woman.

Now that I have written this book, the story line is almost over, so I want to let you know in advance. Above, thank you all for your long-term companionship and support.

This book was released in mid-May and will be on the shelves on July 10th. It has 210,000 free words and 570,000 VIP words. So far, the number of updated words has reached 780,000, with more than 10,000 updates per day for more than 50 consecutive days. [How many new authors are working harder than me? Tsundere. Let me tell you that this book is in its middle stage. According to the outline, there are three important nodes at the end, and there are about 600,000 words left. The total number of words in this book is estimated to be about 1.5 Million. If you read the book carefully, brothers who like to think wildly will probably guess the big plot behind it. First, the Sun Moon Continent collided with the Douluo Continent, a war broke out, and the Star Luo Empire unified the continent; The second is the attack of sea soul beasts. The mermaid clan leads many sea soul beasts in the deep sea to attack the enlarged Douluo Continent; Third, Dai Mubai rescued the Golden Dragon King and began to lead Douluo Continent to resist the God Realm, fighting for justice and a future for Douluo Continent, which has been oppressed by the God Realm for millions of years... These are simple post-production outlines. The author needs to continue to think about how to write them specifically, and strive to write a different story for everyone. As the number of words written increases, the author has clearly felt his progress. The following plots will definitely be written as well and exciting as possible, and he will do his best not to disappoint every paying reader. This month is coming to an end, and the author's updates have exceeded 300,000 words. Due to some factors, the author's updates will drop significantly later, maybe only more than 4,000 words in one update, or more than 6,000 words in two updates... As for what the factors were, I won't go into details. If I say too much, I will shed tears. Although few people read the book, the author will work hard to update it and strive for continuous updates. Come on! Thank you for the above.

I haven't read this book yet, but I saw that there are only 74 recommendation votes... It's really miserable to give you one recommendation vote 🙂~ Is the writing not good or is it restricted?

There are two Dai Mubai who are still playing with knitting, and the one who doesn't have the White Tiger Spirit, where is your hundred thousand year soul ring, how do you explain it?

The number of words is enough, please read it if the heroine is satisfied

In the first volume, the White Jade King Dai Mubai comes to the world, the western suburbs of the imperial city are robbed and massacred, Emperor Dai Xing kills Qian Xunji, and Bibi Dong ascends the throne. In the second volume, Empress Dowager Shengwen granted marriage to Dai Mubai and Zhu Zhuqing, Zhu Zhuqing's martial soul awakened to form martial soul fusion skills, a hundred thousand-year-old soul beast was sacrificed at the royal hunting ground, the twin martial souls could be cultivated normally, the Tianji Sect invaded the Star Luo Empire and prepared for war, and the Imperial Mausoleum Incident traveled across the Sun and Moon Continent. In the third volume, he awakens the Xuanyuan Sword martial spirit, encounters the Xu family in the Sun and Moon Temple, encounters the Dragon God Immortal Soul in the Dragon Valley, and crosses the continent to the Western Region. In the fourth volume, the new Douluo Continent is created. The Dragon Valley obtains the Dragon God Dragon Ball to trigger changes in the continent, controls the western and northern regions of the Sun and Moon Continent, and opens the Soul Master Canyon to destroy the Emperor of the Sun and Moon Empire. In the fifth volume, the emperor of the deep sea and the mermaid clan appear in the world, Poseidon Island does not care about foreign affairs, Wuhun City undergoes a sudden change, Dai Mubai ascends to the throne of Star Luo Emperor, events in the divine world occur, and the Tianji Sect is destroyed. In the sixth volume, Bibi Dong established the Wuhun Empire, and Qian Renxue took control of the Tiandou Empire... To be continued

Why are there only more than 40 chapter recommendation votes? This is worse than me. I will give you one tomorrow, come on!

I saw your review of my book "One Sword of Frost and Fourteen States". I think it makes sense, but I only saw half of it, and I can't see the rest. Was it deleted? Give me some more advice