The System Borrows Its Ability from Me

To put it simply, starting from chapter 500, it's like a different person wrote it. The way Tai Shang Tu writes this chapter has great potential. Taishang 81 Transformation, one Qi transforms into three pure beings, which is similar to other clone techniques. It just calls a few people out to fight, but is it not as strong as the original one? ? ? ? ? ? Then you still have to practice ghost cultivation. Can't you write about the picture of the monkey? I want a better system than yours. I can't bear to upgrade? ? Still have any concerns about the system? I'm just a good guy who is in the 4th level of martial arts and has an idea for the system. That's really a good guy. You've just started on this road and you need a spaceship. Another one, the protagonist is transparent and perfect, and has opened the 365 acupuncture point, so you write that you can't survive when you meet someone at a higher level? ? Are you afraid that if it weren't for 365 tofu acupoints, the gap in opening acupoints that is tens or even hundreds of times would end up like this? ? The most important thing is the Dharma. I won't talk about other special things. Can't you move closer to the Supreme Being? Not to mention how special it is. Can you at least have some yin and yang? Or maybe some special ability? ? Are all 365 supernatural powers made of tofu? You can at least ask the question. Instead of saying that everyone is awesome, you can just open a magical melting pot and write you down as one. I feel like you have no idea at the end of writing. Let me help you think about it. Let's just say there is a Jiuyou. Based on this, you can probably write a spiritual energy revival and a fusion of the world. As for Jiuyou, you can write it as a pawn like a demon. Wouldn't the subsequent plot be much easier to develop? The more you write, the more uncomfortable I feel. Use the system as needed. Just follow the Tai Shang picture or the monkey picture. Your Tai Shang picture looks like a ghost and is so uncomfortable. To be honest, even if it is a pig, if you open 365 and give it a Dharma image, is it not the same as beating a pig? ? Your 365 upgraded Dharma image is no different from ordinary people, so you are really vomiting. When a pig comes, let alone Zhu Bajie, he is also a pig king. The protagonist you wrote really looks like he is made of tofu. The foundation is made of tofu, while others are made of reinforced concrete.

It feels very bland, and the upgrades are also very slow. Many descriptions of the rankings between fights are unclear and confusing. The rankings written at the beginning are useless and unnecessary. This high-end martial arts novel is the most bland and boring I have ever read.

How many novels set a large number of settings on school life, but school life is always an irrelevant narrative, and the imagination is always attached to easy existing patterns and seems simple.

😄 It feels like the author has become a dad, and the plot of the article is becoming more and more interesting...

Simple Rourou

Another introduction about what is most popular, the content is as bad as a scumbag

In the early stage, the storyline was bland and not very exciting... In the later stage, it was a bit exciting.

The article is very exciting. As I was reading it, I kept worrying about how much time was left before I would finish it. Unfortunately, it was still not enough. Come on, be thicker and longer!

Author, you are so short 🤫

I have tried very hard to see more than a hundred pictures, but it still poisoned me to the point of passing out. He went on an adventure with a woman. Earlier, because the protagonist brought delicious dry food, he said that the protagonist only did such unimportant things. Later, he went to great lengths to save the woman, and even took the initiative to let the woman practice in that treasured place with him. It didn't matter, after all, the woman came to this place with the protagonist. But when the other woman was in a coma, the male protagonist took her to escape with him to detoxify him. He also offered to share half of the treasures he found on the way with her. I don't understand how you can't be so holy this morning! Then while saying that it was less cost-effective to redeem it for the system than for the military, he turned around and redeemed 9,000 points.

Chapter 44 is a little bit poisonous. Only with strength can you dare to start, but you will not obey military orders and insist on being cannon fodder.

I don't want to read it when you chose the military for training in the library and the military. You clearly know that the system can improve your skills and increase your points. Why don't you go to the military to fight in the library instead of increasing your points? ? ? ? ? ? ? It's better not to add this option. This plot is too stupid.

This book has a bright spot: the protagonist has a younger brother instead of a younger sister

The protagonist is treating his classmates as fools. The squad leader is certified by the school and has benefits. The protagonist's deputy squad leader only has obligations but no benefits, and is a fool. It turned out that the deputy squad leader really acted like a fool and helped the protagonist without any benefits. How can the protagonist be so good if he only wants benefits and does not work?

When I see a clone, I am afraid that the author will write about the clone, because many fantasy fairy tales write about clones, especially the kind of clone technique that is not only used for combat. The clone has a separate plot, and it will collapse after writing, and the number of words will slow down the plot and various problems will arise.

The subject matter of the entire book is acceptable and relatively novel, but why is the score so low? Let me make three points, purely personal feelings, please don't criticize 1. The character of the protagonist is simply extremely poisonous. Fang Ping, who is a world-famous martial artist, also traveled through the world of peace, and in the early stage, he only knew about cults, but he is so cruel that he kills bad guys for the sake of wealth. He is never soft-hearted, and he repays his kindness to his master and those who are kind to him, but it seems very smooth and does not feel artificial at all, and does not make readers feel embarrassed and pretentious. However, I always think that there is something wrong with the protagonist of this book. He is hypocritical, artificial, and pretentious, which really makes readers feel helpless. The words, especially the part about the master, made me embarrassed. There are masters in Koburi all over the world, but that is respect that is really paid for with life, and the protagonist respects it because he has seen it with his own eyes. The protagonist of this book is because he heard others say this and saw this person. I respect the amiable master, but it is really false. The key is to show respect at all times. There are also soldiers. I also know that soldiers need to be respected to protect their families and the country, but if the writing is not good, it should be brief. Don't always be warm-hearted and grateful. It is very hypocritical. 2. Settings such as realm and martial arts: To be honest, I find it very confusing. Author, can you please introduce the system of this world in detail? It's really uncomfortable to see. 3. Protagonist upgrade and system settings: The protagonist upgrade is too slow. It doesn't feel exciting at all. Not to mention how fast it is, but it only takes three or four months to go from entry to completion. What a snail. Also, it is best to have a more detailed upgrade system for system contribution, otherwise it will be too messy.

So how do you pursue rationality when writing a book? Put yourself into the protagonist and suddenly get a plug-in that can absorb the spirit and material from the outside world to enhance yourself. What would you do? Borrowing books everywhere? Browse the library? Eat buffet? Student loans? In theory, there should be many companies in the world like this that open various low-end martial arts or introductory martial arts to the public for free in order to attract people, so go ahead and take advantage of them. Seriously, if you can grow your golden fingers just by chatting with the principal, eating, and drinking tea, if you can't get 100,000 points in three days, your brain development will be considered delayed.

I don't understand why the author can write the protagonist to be reborn and immediately integrate into the original family, and he is still the same as his biological child. It is very painful to watch. You might as well write a time-traveled soul and be swallowed up by the original owner. That would be more normal.

What you did is disrespectful

A student does not improve his own strength, but helps his classmates improve. . . Isn't this a mentor thing? If you want to cultivate the strength of the human race, you have to be strong yourself, and you don't need to say the specific strength of each person, just start the fight and win. . . .

Give it up, this is the result of this book. I have never seen anyone dare to gamble with other people's lives without consulting them. What qualifications do you have to use other people's lives and property as chips? Who do you think you are?

I'm very curious, the author's writing power is really not enough. Still a student? He's very student-like and has no experience in many things. Do soldiers talk like this? The psychological description is also very tender and full of youthfulness.

I thought the title of the book was true, but it turns out that the ability is still systematic, and the protagonist is still an ordinary person without a system.

Update soon, I want to see it. Speaking of which, there is a picture that I hope the author can include in the novel. The picture of the Three Saints comes from the decree of life. Gathering the three holy methods of Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism, one's life and death will both end, and the golden elixir will be revealed. The author can check it

In this world of low martial arts, I'm a bit confused. Aren't airplanes and cannons good? I feel that the protagonist's martial arts training is no better than a bullet. He can't crack mountains and crack rocks even after being hit with it. Even if he reaches the level of master, his lifespan is ridiculously short.

The subject matter is very novel and the description is very delicate. It is a good book. I suggest you come in and read it.

The law should not be passed lightly, and the world of martial arts is more monopolized than the real economic world. But the protagonist is good, he has excellent knowledge and publishes papers casually. Although it is only for beginners, the upper class does not have such excellent knowledge? (Don't argue, you are right.)

Extremely low-profile and globally powerful, the characters have no emotions at all. I can't even remember the name of the protagonist after reading a hundred chapters.

This setting is very novel, (ง •̀_•́)ง

After reading a few chapters, I was persuaded to quit. Although it was free, I just didn't want to read it when it was given to me.