Covering the Sky with a Flick of the Finger and Calming Down the Immortals

I feel like my writing is pretty rubbish lately, so if you are still here, it would be nice to give me some comments and chat. Is there a problem with the rhythm, or is there a problem with this coolness. It's hard for a new author to find this, but everyone is an old bookworm. Please give me some advice. , I know this about water 😅😵😭

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The protagonist faces the Qing Emperor's heart and advises him not to be too promiscuous. The Qing Emperor is still alive, and that heart is particularly heartbreaking. The original Yan Ruyu used it to reach the quasi-emperor level. Just get the fragment of the immortal cauldron. There is a mentally retarded novel that sucked 50% of the blood essence from Qing Emperor's heart. I don't know what to say in an instant.

This protagonist is so useless that I feel like the entire universe cannot be filled with him. Soon there will be several Immortal King scriptures that exceed the standards of covering the sky. I wonder if I can help him climb to the realm of great power by then 🤭🤭😅😅

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Sublimated physique is also good. I always feel that the protagonist always thinks too much. Take Ye Fan as an example. It is actually a mistake to practice 5 kinds of scriptures in the early stage. But Ye Fan takes it one step at a time. When he encounters a problem, he just gets through it and that's it. Don't worry about failure. The protagonist is different. He feels that everything wants to be perfect. This makes it less enjoyable. Don't worry about whether the Heaven Swallowing Demon Technique will pollute your physique. Maybe there will be a new solution by then. Hands and legs are tied, although he says he aims to be the Immortal Emperor. But with this kind of mentality in Zhetian, I personally think it's hard to say whether it can achieve enlightenment. Or be like the great emperor Luan Gu. Have an invincible Taoist heart. Or be like Ye Fan. Enemy? Suppressing with one punch, you are invincible. The predecessors have proved it, and you can break all the ways. Either like a ruthless person. Having a problem? Once you untie it, that's it. Facing the darkness, you can go into the tiger's den alone without ever thinking about failure. The protagonist gives me the feeling of playing a second-brush game from a God's perspective. Prepare everything you can get in the early stage before starting to push the main plot.

Author, what you wrote must have collapsed! A drop of Qing Emperor's essence and blood allows the protagonist to transform once on the other side. Then the protagonist becomes an emperor and all the resources in the universe are not enough!

The transformation of the protagonist uses the essence of the Kunlun Immortal Fetus, dozens of Medicine King strains, dozens of drops of Qing Emperor's essence and blood, and a few perfect Emperor Sutras for cultivation. The combat power is only three bans, and the four bans are possible only by superimposing various secret techniques. If nothing else, the essence of the Kunlun Immortal Fetus that the protagonist plundered did not improve the realm. Even if the potential it transformed into was not as good as the Chaos Body and the Holy Body, it was definitely better than the God King Body. Even if the protagonist is in a mortal body, with so many resources to enhance his origin and potential, he is already more powerful than any king's body. Obviously the writing is good, but the author just likes to weaken the protagonist's combat power, and you claim that all the resources are used to transform the protagonist's physique, but in the end, the combat power is still reduced to a dog. . .

So many opportunities still can't make the protagonist change? See, my son has the qualifications to be a great emperor? A great emperor's inheritance took off. The protagonist is not as good as Wang Teng! If this opportunity is given to Wang Teng, even Ye Fan will not be able to play it.

You can guess how to enter Kunlun😁

The protagonist is written to be relatively useless. Although I hate the brainless and cowardly way of the system, so many precious resources were snatched and used in the early stage. The quasi-emperor is jealous. He also emphasizes that the protagonist's physique is not as good as some divine body. After spending so much essence to become an immortal, the level of the emperor's essence and blood is still so low. If you want to become the emperor, the entire universe will not be able to support you. This is the lowest version of Emperor Essence and Blood I have ever seen. There is a book that asked me to vouch for the demon character. I can recommend the author to read it. It also relies on massive resources to transform step by step. It seems that there is also a plug-in that can see the past. The resources he used are more reasonable.

Heels and feet are the most important in the ancient world, perfect physique is the most important, thoughts are the most important in the stars change, will is the most important in the immortal rebellion, mortal opportunities are the most important, and eternal life is the most important. May I ask, the author of the protagonist, what advantages have you arranged for him? Physical pass, heel pass, will pass, origin pass, opportunity and idea are the protagonist's biggest advantages. If the protagonist's improvement requires a huge amount of resources, then the resources that cover the sky are obviously not enough. Then it is obvious that the only thing that can make the protagonist's way out is an idea. Thought is a very mysterious thing. Although it is said to work, it has no real power. Even if it is said to be useless, it has actually promoted the development of human civilization. Even those amazing skills and magical powers can only appear because of it. Let's develop from this direction. If we want to solve the gap in resources and strength, we can only make breakthroughs in this direction. Otherwise, even if the author makes the protagonist's combat power become divinely forbidden, it will only be about Chen Dong's ability to cover the sky. You don't need to think about creating magical powers right now, but what about other aspects? The idea of ​​a new human being in the 21st century is not ancient

Jiang Yichen's plot suggestion is to be concise. Thunder took action, beheaded the spiritual beast, made the horn into a treasure detector, and also led to a self-created plot. The only thing I'm wary of right now is the supporting characters... This Jiang Yichen feels like he was born into an ancient family, but the original work was still defeated by the early cliché settings. Here, I suggest you have a small climax to give Jiang Yifei face and kill the spirit beast directly to save him from committing sin. This spiritual beast is quite awesome when you think about it later. It feels good to make a magic weapon.

This world is very dangerous. The Great Emperor is just cannon fodder. Only by becoming an Immortal Emperor can he still have a small chance of survival. Look at the corpse of the Immortal Emperor who is unlucky and has become like this due to a drop of blood. And this drop of blood is not necessarily my aunt's blood.

Author, why don't you write that you are always short of resources and have plundered the whole of Kunlun? These resources can't be sanctified? There are also demon emperor essences and blood, and there are so many medicine kings, you might as well write about plundering restricted areas and nourishing yourself! I always feel a bit poisonous when I see that there are many resources but not enough to transform into a dragon.

It's still a scramble for resources. Although Zhetian resources are important, they are not absolute. Can we fight more? However, the protagonist's resources are too superior, so the fight does not overwhelm him and it seems that the protagonist is too fw. So, you need to arrange a supporting role that impresses the protagonist. That kind of blow from the "heart" lets the protagonist know that no matter how good the resources are, if he is not good enough, he will only be the next emperor. Rich fighting experience, personality charm is similar to Hua Yunfei. Only a supporting character with an online IQ will let the protagonist know that if he is not rich in resources, he will be hung up and beaten. This is how you can shape your Taoist heart. Further improve the character design of the protagonist. Otherwise, based on your current progress, you will only be able to play in seconds. If you don't wait in seconds, the protagonist will waste resources in vain. If you keep running in seconds, the plot will become too streamlined. So a BT supporting role is needed to set off the protagonist and give the protagonist a sense of urgency.

The biggest problem is that the protagonist is too weak. Does the author have any misunderstanding about this concept? The protagonist has this opportunity, this physique, consumed so many resources, and transformed like this. He only has three bans. Opposite him is a supporting role and two bans. Opposite him is a pervert. This is not a genius or a prince on the ancient road. Even if most of the resources are turned into heritage and foundation, it will not be so rubbish. Even if the realm is much lower and things cannot be released, this is too outrageous. He is much weaker than Ye Fan, who has nothing at this time in the original work. It should definitely be seven or eight taboos, and this will not make the combat power supermodel. The higher the level, the difference in combat power with the same number of taboos is not a concept. It can be understood in this way. If you have eight taboos at a low level, when you reach a high level, the gap may not be eight taboos, it will become smaller, in some way. In a sense, this can be regarded as a manifestation of potential. The protagonist should always be in the eight forbidden areas, and because the upper limit is eight, it exceeds eight, but it is not shown, so it can still be eight after the realm is improved, so there may be a chance to enter the divine forbidden area in the future To put it another way, it's not that the protagonist can't be in a tough fight, but the plot is too unreasonable. It's so outrageous and completely illogical for two wall hangings to fight a few supporting characters. I don't know what the author is thinking. This is no longer a mortal body. It's really a waste.

There is a connection bug between Covering the Sky and Perfection. Like the third generation of the ruthless man from the sky, he fought his way out of the immortal palace. You must know that in the so-called several lives, the combat power will not change much unless there is a qualitative change. Like, the ruthless man III destroyed the Immortal Palace around, Dark Turmoil still fought fiercely with the Self-Destruction Supreme, and he didn't make a move in seconds. You must know that the Self-destruction Supreme has been sleeping all the time. Just at this level, doesn't it mean that the emperor is not afraid of immortal weapons? This combination of perfection would appear abrupt. Because the Perfect Supreme has no such performance. Of course, this may be related to the fact that the immortal weapon is unmanned. Then I discovered that the Emperor's blood that covers the sky has many benefits. The Void is dyed too much, and it begins to evolve like an immortal weapon. It is the closest imperial weapon to an immortal weapon except for late-stage immortal weapons. The Immortal Emperor bathed in the blood of Emperor Chu, promoting the transformation of the immortal road of mortals. Perfect Supreme obviously does not have this effect. Combined with a post I saw recently. I think the human way and the immortal way may not be as high and low as perfection. After cultivating the human way, you can cultivate the immortal way. Look, the green tripod, the immortal weapon that covers the sky, is stuck in the crack on the road to immortality. The laws of the immortal realm are acting on the green tripod, transforming the immortal runes. What does this mean? The Immortal Who Covers the Sky and Red Dust is following the path of humanity. Here I would like to point out the reason why I think that Zhetian's human path and immortal path are not superior and inferior (here we only start from the setting of Zhetian) 1. The original text of Zhetian says that the second immortal can ascend to the immortal world. (I know about the perfect setting, so I will discuss it from the setting of Zhetian here) 2. Immortals have been killed by the Immortal Tower 3. Before his death, the Immortal Emperor said that there was no such strong person as him in the Immortal Realm. 4. There are not many real immortals. 5. When masters of the Imperial Way go to the Immortal Realm, they have to cut off the foundation of the Imperial Way and reshape the foundation of the Immortal Way. If they are not enlightened, they will directly replace it (such as: Ji Ziyue and her daughter). Let's analyze these points together. First of all, Immortals can ascend, so what follows In a certain sense, the realm only begins to upgrade in the immortal realm. Combined with the words of the Immortal Emperor, we know that the ceiling of the immortal realm is also the emperor. Then based on the immortals killed by Huangta, we can draw a conclusion that the immortals covering the sky are the lives of the immortal realm. It is impossible for Huangta to suppress the immortals in the later stages. So can we come up with a setting for the period of covering the sky? The Great Emperor's retrograde attack on immortals, is he attacking the creatures of the immortal realm? Essentially, the realm of the Great Emperor should not appear in the mortal world, because the Second Immortal is about to ascend. So, it's actually the Emperor of the Imperial Dao versus the Emperor of the Immortal Dao? Then the retrograde killing of immortals will be explained. The Zhe-style Red Dust Fairy is actually still in the field of humanity. Perfect Chendong added the Immortal Tribulation to No. 10 In order to play No. 10. So I finally came to the conclusion. Zhetian Human Dao and Immortal Dao are two branches on the same level. The path of perfect humanity and immortality is a path of succession. If you want to write perfectly, you have to set the strength between the two. (The following paragraph comes with an analysis of the perfect setting) Like Perfect No. 10, Who once left many spells on the road to immortality, Zhetian's Six-Way Reincarnation Fist came from the road to immortality, but Zhetian Six-Way Fist is also said to be related to the founder of the Holy Body. However, the founder of the Holy Body and No. 10 Can't compete with each other. As if it has nothing to do with it, then the method of Six Paths Reincarnation Fist is not as simple as a humane method. And this Six-Path Fist Covering the Sky is very different from the Emperor Jing. So, I have come to a new conclusion: Immortal magic and imperial magic have the same expressive power in the human realm. It's just that one can use the Immortal Way and the other needs to be deduced and sublimated. Like the Nine Secrets of the Holy Ruins. So the author must write down the relationship between them well.

After eating so many resources and still being so rubbish, you might as well hang out with Li Ruoyu and still be able to become a quasi-emperor. Cultivate yourself. I guess I need to take a lot of elixirs to become a great saint.

In fact, if you, the author, read Zhetian carefully, you will find that everyone's ban is different, and the combat power is really broken. I also mentioned it in this chapter, and it is estimated that the combat power you wrote caused many people to abandon the book. First of all, you are transformed and completed in the realm of the wheel and sea, and you are even transformed again on the road of the Holy Spirit. It is estimated that no one can achieve this condition. Then after you break through, does your combat power still need to be linked to your physical fitness again? It's simply not needed. Because you yourself have embarked on a road that has never been traveled before. You can even compare yourself to the Holy Spirit in terms of combat power, or surpass the Holy Spirit.

Is even the author covered in red hair?

All kinds of resources, all kinds of imperial scriptures and secret techniques, the result is 3 bans

No fun leaving

Author, you should calculate physical constitution and divine power separately! His body is so big, he looks like a 250-year-old in a fight! Invincible magic power at the same level! The leapfrog physique can be tough! A holy body goes to the ancient forbidden land and its magic power is imprisoned, and the body can be transformed into a powerful dragon! What you wrote is so disgusting.

Laughing, I've finished this book, why are you still in the investment new book section? Are the employees at Qidian having a headache? 😅​

When I look at the introduction, I feel like it's plagiarism.

The Eucharist's old age is unknown, and your middle age is unknown.

Author: We should not compare with Ye Fan and others in terms of combat effectiveness. In that world view, the protagonist is simply incomparable at this stage. Besides, our minds will become rigid if we compare the combat power head-on. We feel that the protagonist's growth process is to grab resources - practice - show off - and become an emperor. It's all the same and cannot stand out. Moreover, I felt that the first protagonist was a gorilla; the second one was boring; and the third one gave up. To watch this, I might as well watch Zhetian again. Do you think so? We need to put ourselves in someone else's shoes. Instead of continuing to write this poorly written model, I might as well make the protagonist a character similar to Chu Xuan. First, the protagonist can turn Ye Fan into a gorilla and give up thinking in the face of strategy. Secondly, with this IQ, there is absolutely no shortage of resources, and people will send you resources like crazy. The third one can solve many bugs of the previous mortal body. If your writing skills were stronger, maybe this character would become famous in the circle. It goes without saying that absolute power can ignore all ingenuity. With Ye Fan, a man-made plug-in, there is no need to fake anything 😏

By the way, is it true that only a mortal body can live out the second life when he becomes the Great Emperor? Ruthless people have no beginning, Ye Fan is like this