Sacrifice in Spring

After reading seven chapters, I don't even know who the protagonist is. I'd say it's retro. It doesn't have the charm of classical Chinese. It's popular. It contains some ancient special words. It's seven chapters and it's still describing a move. I doubt that the number of words is too high.

It feels like reading popular science rather than reading a novel. 😰😰

It is admirable to be able to write without desires and desires. If one day the author wants more, the author will be considered a failure. Worthy of admiration! It doesn't look like a novel at first sight.

The paragraph is too long, I can't read it anymore!

This kind of novel is too unfriendly to readers. It has long paragraphs, boring annotations, and all kinds of unfamiliar knowledge. If it is just for fun, it is fine to write it. If you want to make money, I suggest you give up. It is really not competitive... I wish you better and better as you write!

The efforts of the sea of ​​verbal dialogue have been strengthened, and modern spoken language appeared in the pre-Qin Dynasty. Although the most important thing for a novel is not to have great writing skills; it must be consistent with the verbal dialogue of the time and space.

Come on, support the masterpiece. Collected🌹

I would say – am I here to learn notes?

I saw you posting in the group. Your article is indeed not as good as its potential. There are a lot of pardon orders. You can learn from Qin Li's writing method.

I remember that there was a historical and mythological novel about wizards in our circle before. It was also about wizards and gods in the Warring States Period. I signed a contract for it, but the author was a eunuch.

"An old man who time-traveled and picked up rags and made a living by making bad movies" [Investment with confidence] A director graduate from his previous life, accidentally time-traveled into an old man who smelled like sheep and picked up rags. He was arrested for killing people at the beginning, sold a miserable job in variety shows, professional cheating, blackmailing people with group performances, and live broadcast begging Detect ghosts and scare people, crack down on counterfeit goods and sell fake goods, make scary videos to scare people, make funny skits, and make bad movies to extend your life After that, you can travel to infinite planes and other worlds, collect them into movie materials, and come back to scare the audience crazy on the big screen in reality

Saved~ Very interesting to try. I hope I can see you grow up~ Come on ↖(^ω^)↗

Who is the protagonist? Or is this a collection of stories?

Alas, why did the chapter names disappear after 62?

Hehe, you like this kind of slow-paced and down-to-earth historical novel, the style is a bit similar to Yi Zhongtian's detailed version of Chinese history! I would like to ask the author a question. Is the tomb robbing note mentioned many times in it a joke that you buried, or is it an online novel that you use as official history?

Come on 💪 Very good article, I can't put it down

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Does the author mean by looking at other people that there is no protagonist?