The Blind Swordsman Selling Pots in Konoha

Asura? You shouldn't sell the pots, you should replace them yourself

Shabi was also licked by a knife, so he abandoned the book and said goodbye.

Author, I really like this book of yours. I know people can't be greedy, but can you update it quickly?

Some of the plots in this book are particularly stupid. Firstly, the knife was taken away. Although it was returned later, it made people very unhappy. Secondly, the sealing technique could have been learned at any time. It was also sealed. . . This wave of smart-turning operations shocked me

Well, until now, the protagonist's strength is just that of a loser. There is no need for this. The most important thing is development. Now the protagonist is blind except for awakening, but the result is that the strength is still that of a loser. If you insist on saying that there will be in the future, then I have to say, the various film levels in the mid-term and the various six paths in the later stage all depend on the small universe? Or a desperate blow? Or a sudden inspiration? All kinds of sudden abilities?

I won't say how good the previous writing is, but at least it's readable. However, when it comes to the first epic, it's too poisonous. Hong's character is not like this at all. If it's a second creation, OK. Even if Hong's character is like this in this fan world, the follow-up treatment is not done well. It's too poisonous. It shouldn't be given away like this. There is no foreshadowing. Hong's psychology is not written. There is no timely remedy later. It's very poisonous. I abandoned it.

You two say goodbye as husband and wife!

The power system of the dungeon should not be too much higher than that of Naruto. The two are not at the same level. Which profession can the so-called Six Paths Sage beat? There are even three skills. Is it necessary to fight for the so-called Rinnegan Sharingan Sage's body? The dungeon is about apostles. Any apostle can knock the entire Naruto world to the ground and rub it repeatedly! If you leave a good system without upgrading and put the cart before the horse, what kind of fairy body game is there? The game of picking sesame seeds and throwing watermelons is really stupid.

If you want to criticize the author, please send it to me first. Each person has a recommendation form. It is too expensive. After everyone sends it to me, I will give a recommendation form. I will criticize everything that everyone wants to criticize, and I will not make it easier for others.

The plot of this novel is huge, and it's not poisonous. At first, I thought it was quite funny to buy a stainless steel basin worth 100,000 yuan. I didn't expect that the protagonist's bottom line for money was getting lower and lower, and he came up with more and more clever ideas He even asked a person crossing the bridge to pay 10% of the cost of the goods, and also asked Konoha ninjas to come to other countries to guard the bridge all year round. Why don't you just grab the money? The money is not much faster than this.

It's not well written, it's messy, it's funny but not funny, it's like a stupid dick

I'm a bit confused, how blind is the protagonist? Are all the things you see seen with your mind's eye? Is there a range of things that the mind's eye can see? Are there any restrictions?

Why is the protagonist always being picked on? ! ! AWSL

Very childish. . Everyone is in a team of three, and the protagonist forcibly inserts four people to form the seventh team. .

After reading two chapters, I have a few questions: By the way, are you really selling stainless steel basins? Why should a blind man with no ability to defend himself enter Konoha (no one checks the gate?)? Where did you get the goods? Where did the principal come from? You said you sold it for 100,000 and others actually bought it? Will ninjas be forcibly bought and sold? Would civilians spend so much money to buy a basin when their lives were not in danger? ... If you think about it carefully, you can find many problems. If you are serious, then there is something wrong with this writing. It is best to change the beginning. Of course, if you are just writing a funny article, then just pretend that I didn't say anything

It turned out to be a joke, but I went to the wrong place.

Good Naruto, why did the author write it as a business article, even if it is to open a jar, but it is really not suitable for Naruto. The writing style is not very suitable. Naruto really prefers fighting. You have a strong business style, and even if the protagonist does not have the profession of blind, it will not affect the reading at all. Not to mention fairy magic, it feels like you are trying to pretend to be bad. People have fairy magic for fighting. The protagonists are mining and sword-wielding. A good battle episode is written as a business episode, various businesses, let alone selling a house. You can just ask Fat Li to do a large-scale wood escape and build a house

He's good at pretending to be awkward. After cleaning the protagonist, the protagonist is interesting, so the protagonist becomes a funny guy, and I want the protagonist to be stylish, so the protagonist keeps pretending to be cool. So the question is, what does a pretentious funny person look like in the eyes of readers?

It feels more and more childish. The protagonist is obviously capable and strong, so why should he succumb to Konoha? It's not about revenge or anything, but at least he shouldn't let the village affect his development. It feels like an idiot. The protagonist is an imbecile and has never received nine years of compulsory education.

Author, why is there another eunuch in your new book, Except Animist Sister? Has it been taken off the shelves yet? Fighting is addictive. Is it worth your investment?

Tsunade felt a little weird after she took over.

Everyone seems to be scolding? Should I join you after watching it? Or just leave?

The author turned the Naruto fan novel into a Boruto fan novel

One thing to say, it's really disgusting to act like this after being knifed, but everything else is fine.

Now this episode reminds me of Let the Bullets Fly

Oops, am I going to cut one again?

Why don't you write it? It's very nice.

Let me ask everyone, how many chapters did Dao come back after he was forced to go away by Hong?

It's so beautiful, why doesn't anyone see it? I read them all in one go🤭

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~