The Legend of Yun Niang

1. It is recommended to add the chapter name so that the experience will be better (●°u°●)​". 2. The introduction needs to be changed. Let's introduce the general content or tasks of the book. Now these two sentences... Are too flat and unattractive. 3. The content tends to be smooth and rich in life, but the word "flat" is too ordinary. You can add a little imagination. Anyway, the system of the book is a historical classical framework, so don't be afraid of collapse. Maybe there will be unexpected effects if it collapses☹️ (Personal opinion, don't mention it.) For example, let's add some characteristics of modern women to the character of Yun Niang, or the frailty of ancient women (then she can be written differently), let's use an analogy! 4. The introduction is a bit simple and seems a bit irrelevant to the content of the book. I really recommend changing it.

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