Become a Boss by Hanging Up

The setting is quite novel and looks interesting.

Ah, actually, it's okay to write about the early stages, but I didn't explain the techniques or anything like that. If you follow the setting of Xuanyuan Sword Immortal's secret book that can stack attributes, it would be quite cool to tease the little brother by raising the root bone in the early stage.

I wish you a smooth signing, but the signing is only the first step, and it will definitely be a single game later. You have to write 300,000, or even 400,000, so more people will watch!

Congratulations on signing the contract successfully, spread the flowers

Whether it's wonderful or not, I want someone to make suggestions. I hope you won't be stingy and leave lots of comments.

There is something wrong with the layout. Personally, I don't like long paragraphs of text, that is, the paragraphs are not divided well. To be honest, I will be impatient when I see a page of text without paragraphs. In short, paragraphing is very important.

I have already invested. Your paragraph is too long, so I still need to break it up. I will give you recommendation votes every day. Don't stop updating. If you can't continue writing, I hope you can click to finish it. Come on!

The subject matter is good, but I can't stand the long paragraphs. The author could break it into smaller paragraphs.

As a cultivator, I still have to sleep on my stomach and feel sore and sore in my back. It's so unworthy.