Misty Southern Dynasties Chaos

I just noticed today that my label has changed. Signing the contract is the beginning of the pressure. Save the manuscript, there is a tough battle to fight~😡 Come on!

The writing is beautiful, the description is very delicate and sentimental, and the opening chapter is very attractive, but there is one biggest problem: Quickly! ! ! Point! ! ! More! ! ! New! ! !

Accept it, thank you, the author, please give it a try!

1. I feel that the writing style is very mature. How should I put it? The writing style is very comfortable and elegant. It does not use too many gorgeous decorations, but it is full of ancient charm, but it is very smooth, easy and not difficult to read. 2. I have a strong sense of immersion, and I really want to go to prison and save my little sister, hahaha. 3. Details, I will give you thumbs up for describing the details of the palace. 4. An immature suggestion, you can consider subdividing the paragraphs. You can see that the subsequent paragraphs have been subdivided, but some paragraphs are still a bit long. If you are thoughtful when writing, it is easy for long paragraphs to appear. You can break them off after you finish writing. All in all, it's great, come on.

The characters and stories written by Da Da are thought-provoking, great! I won't mention the suggestion. It looks like someone mentioned segmentation~ Come on, come on

The description is very detailed, thank you very much 🌹

The ancient sayings are well written, the writing style is delicate, the type I like, keep up the good work, and I will comment back after I have gained some weight.

This name should be right, come on😊

Come on, Fighting!

Already collected, keep up the good work, welcome to return to collect

Resolutely eliminate zero rewards, pat the girl on the shoulder, come on!

Return visit, keep up the good work!