Xingjin

I just read a few pictures. My writing skills are really good. I believe it will be successful. Come on! It would be better if you could describe the historical changes from the time Sima Yan became emperor to the Western Jin Dynasty, as well as the living conditions of the people at that time 😁 Of course, there is also some information about the protagonist before he traveled through time.

I like this background, the writing is very good, thank you very much

The author has slightly modified the content of the first chapter in order to make the overall background of the entire story more coherent. You can go back and read it again. (In addition, the collection of this book has grown significantly in the past few days, but the recommendation votes have not moved much. Now the number of collections is almost double the number of recommended votes. I still hope that everyone can vote, and by the way, the investment is also very good. ☺️☺️☺️Thanks to Haoran (❁´ω`❁))

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Most of the people writing about the two Jin Dynasties these days... So, come on!

Investment road review 5 points for each item This rating is based on my personal feeling and is for reference only I can't get started, I haven't seen much of this subject Environment 2 points Scene 3 points Plot 4 points Logic 3 points 4 points for investment 0 points for chasing investment 4 points for writing 3 points for characters It has a certain sense of involvement. After all, it is ancient times, so it is very important to have this. Don't worry about chasing investment, because the author is new and the book is relatively risky.

Huan Wen is a relatively unpopular historical figure to the public. I hope the author can interpret the character from multiple aspects. Moreover, the Jin Dynasty produced many familiar idioms, which can also be used in the writing process to create a distance between him and the readers. Now is the era when humorous articles are popular, come on