Marvel Visionary

Putting aside the fact that in Marvel you are creating Eastern magic weapons, don't you think the style of painting is wrong?

Don't embody magic weapons, but embody two-dimensional or tokusatsu products, Kuuga's spiritual stones, Gaia memory, or 5 sets of armors in 555.

I'm not saying that, but is the envy, jealousy, and hatred shown by the North Star in front of me true? You can have envy, but what is jealousy and hatred? If she really had this expression, the protagonist would have sex with her and finish her off. He was kind enough to help her, but he still hated the protagonist.

I don't know if it's because I have no imagination or because the author deliberately wrote this way. Wouldn't they be threatening? You must know that the world is relatively peaceful only after nuclear bombs are available. You can threaten them to set fire to the mountains, which is as high as Australia's wildfires, or deploy a circle of super-large-yield nuclear bombs in coastal cities, and receive signals at regular intervals so that they will not explode. Or use nuclear bombs to blow up the Yellowstone volcano. If that doesn't work, find a Storm Girl. Similar to going to the ocean and creating a small typhoon circle every day, and then a big typhoon hits the shore. A rain girl comes in the middle and drowns in the flood. Someone like Magneto should use electromagnetic guns to interfere with the magnetic field of planes and bomb cities. It feels worse than real terrorists. Really, if you have no imagination, you can read more posts from book friends.

I think this protagonist is a bit stupid. If you travel through time and become the ruler of a force, and this force is not owned in the original plot, it means that you have changed the world, and you will continue to change the world. The world can no longer go back, so I think there is something wrong with the brain of this main group, even though it has changed. It's better to make a more radical change, and what's more, you've traveled to a movie universe, so even if you change something, it won't change it like the comic universe.

A good hand is played poorly. For such a good ability to be written like this by you, you are also a talent.

Have you become innocent with children after traveling through time? Don't understand anything?

I was so pissed off when I read your novel that I read the Dreamer Sequence

The main character of SB is so stupid. He is living alone. Why do you keep bringing them with you? It makes me sick.

It took Tony three months to successfully build Mark, but it took the author six to seven days to complete it. It was awesome. It was the first time I saw two people making a machine by themselves, and it was so fast as a robot.

After reading Chapter 20, I can only say that some of your routines are too old, and your character descriptions are not very good. For example, the writing of these two women is disgusting, and it seems that you have a tendency to treat this woman as the heroine. Qiuqiu, if you can't write about women, just don't write about heroines, okay? Even if you write about men and insist on women, it's better than this.

It feels messy, with no sense of immersion, time travel is completely an excuse, and the protagonist seems to be mentally retarded. Before time travel, you lived alone in the mountains, completely isolated from the world, didn't you understand anything? A ten-year-old knows more than you. It completely lacks the responsibility and behavior of a time traveler. It makes people confused. The language and behavior are too childish. Who showed it to primary school students?

Toxic... Gone...

A good idea coupled with a shit-like plot, is it easy to gain social experience? Little social experience? But you can't tell it from the dialogue and actions at all. If you don't have that experience, don't force yourself to write something you're not familiar with. Read more and try to figure out how others write.

This protagonist... Is simply being plotted all the time. Is this your special hobby, author?

A good hand of cards is played badly, by nb

NZT 48 can be used to make people smarter, learn anything quickly, and engage in scientific research. Then, it can be used to manifest superpower crystals, which can have telekinesis, and then it can be used to manifest exercises, jade slips, cultivation techniques, secret books, or magic books, meditation methods, etc.

😥The behavior of the pig's feet makes me want to laugh. Just like a fool, if you get a girlfriend, your background will be revealed.

A good idea, coupled with a bunch of restrictions and occasional settings, self-pleasure turns into shit

What if I just drive these two people out?