Become a Man and Be a Boss

1. Look at the title and introduction. Well, it's very powerful. 2. The plot is smooth and stable. 23. Some paragraphs are too long and cause eye pain. 4. Some punctuation marks are incorrect. 5. Although the plots in the first few chapters are foreshadowing, they are still too fragmented and a bit confusing. Suggest changes and encourage each other

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After reading the first chapter, there are no flaws. The writing is very good. Scenes of fighting and rescuing people are interspersed, giving readers a strong sense of tension. The dialogues of the characters are also concise and interesting. In just a few words, the characters' personalities and images become very three-dimensional 🌹🌹 Let me express my love for Da Da. In addition, I am very grateful for taking the time to read my novel, and I am very grateful ❤️

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This is definitely a female video, I have never seen anything like this When I saw the title of the book, I couldn't help but complain.

There is no Chapter 1, Chapter 2, just Chapter 3. What the hell?