Canyon Operating Monster

After reading the article, I was thinking about what kind of makeup photos would not show the face. Until I actually searched it.

Play for fun, make trouble for trouble, don't use Sister Zhou as the heroine, otherwise this book will be sold on the street

Chapters 177-182, it's outrageous to use six chapters to write a game to rank the Poem Fairy, and still use vn to play the AD Poem Fairy support. Chapter 185 and 186, against IG, I thought I could see zuo fighting against Rookie, but you gave me the whole April Fool's Day job, and you also wrote a wave of April Fool's Day BP in detail, and the battle was just brushed off, how can I be so direct? I think the writing of the semi-finals and finals is really bad. The middle lane is an operation monster that can slow down to 0.25 Times the speed. The bottom lane is uzi+ming, and the jungler mlxg. With this lineup, you tell me to play edg and then use the early disadvantages to come back through team battles? In the first two games of We, we were at a disadvantage and then won in team battles. In the last game, Double C had a huge advantage in the early stage and it was outrageous to play at 4 or 50 minutes. Realistically, you can see whether the coaching staff will be overwhelmed. In the semi-finals, I also used Enchantress, Lu Xian, and Rock Bird. In the finals, I chose Galio and Morgana. For letme, I used Rambo and Qinggang Shadow. Is this BP made by humans? Especially the last one, mlxg blind monk twice in a row was outrageous when R was used to flash cooperate to escape. Are you sure you are writing about Mr. Guo and not Yewang emiy? It's just to let the protagonist force himself to create an incense burner and let everyone see that he is a genius in doing this kind of operation. Then there is the issue of chapters. Some authors are eager to write a bo5 in five chapters. It would be better for you to fill it with the commentary Written 8 chapters in 31 minutes in the first game against EDG Written 7 chapters in 28 minutes in the second game Written 11 chapters in less than 30 minutes in the third game Ten chapters in less than 30 minutes in the first game against WE 27 points in the second game I wrote 7 chapters in less than a minute (there is also a two-in-one chapter) Only 6 chapters were written in more than 40 minutes in the third game The difference between being a good person or not is really big. I remember in the first two games of WE, I explained how the chapter ended with one sentence from you and one sentence from me. If you added more water after the game, I would admit it. A fast-break team is like EDG in your writing. Is there really no problem with this kind of rhythm arrangement? Every time the commentator shouts about fast break, the sharpest spear, and fast-paced team, you really can't see it in your writing, it's outrageous.

I came here for my Shuyi🐛, but now I'm showing off my charisma, :-(

If you have any opinions, differences, or anything you think is wrong, you can point it out. As long as you don't curse or make weird remarks, I will try my best to accept it and correct it or explain it clearly. It must be noted here that I deleted this chapter so that there are not many words and comments. They are all curse words or weird comments. The ban was only imposed when I was in a bad mood, but it has been lifted now that my anger has subsided. That's it, I hope everyone can speak harmoniously.

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It is difficult for RNG to come on as a substitute. You also directly chose the highest difficulty. Xiaohu has been substituted for so many years and has not been substituted for ten games. Your career path is over before it even begins. Just retire.

These chapters are quite well written, and as long as the author can persevere, I will persevere. I'm so happy to finally see an RNG book.

A good girl, but she has a mouth! No way, no way, someone is going to attack this?

Ever since MSI in 2018, I have gradually disliked rng. Even if rng won the summer championship that year, it didn't feel like it, and they lost their fans in the World Championship. If you have been paying attention to rng, you will find that rng's top, middle and jungle are the backbone positions, and those who are not present are always the strongest. In rng, if you play these three positions well, you will be shared with the bottom lane. If you play poorly, you will be placed under a microscope and magnified infinitely. Kasar had an electric thigh before coming to rng. After coming to rng, he seemed to be playing well. However, due to his lack of form in a few rounds, fans only remembered Xiangguo, as if Xiangguo was the biggest contributor to the MSI championship (actually Xiangguo only played a few games in MSI) As for AJ, I remember he was a big player before coming to rng, but now he is gone Wolves are called the Wolves, and he was the captain before coming to rng. After he came to rng, his condition got worse and worse (he was the most criticized top laner ever), but after leaving rng, he rejuvenated in LGD. JKL's contract problem, maybe Ah Shui has a problem, but it can make people willing to pay millions in liquidated damages, plus not playing games for nearly a season and not going to rng, it can be seen how outrageous the rng management is Guozi Ge's solo kill king last season has been proved It's clear that he is capable. Since you rng recalled him, why didn't you let him play after a few games? Can't the new team give him more opportunities to adapt? The worst is to rotate with Xiaohu. Otherwise, why did you recall him? He played well in es. Isn't your rng delaying people's youth now? My favorite rng was between 2017 and 18msi. The rngs after that had too many problems and I really couldn't like them.

To be honest, I don't like RNG. It's either that I don't like the players or I simply don't like this club.

If you don't say anything secretly, I'm just here for Sister Zhou!

It's very well written, and I've summarized the things that I feel (personally) uncomfortable with. First of all, it's about the tone of the work. If it is a pure novel, it is best to pursue the feeling of pleasure blindly. Even if the description is a little outrageous, it is still within the acceptable range if it is mindless enough. For this point, you can refer to the mercenary system of the alliance next door. But if it is an article based on mutual victory and defeat and does not highlight personal strength, then the team cooperation part needs to be strengthened. Showing operations in team battles is more in line with the title of the work. Of course, the laning period can also be used to describe operations, but the proportion can be reduced a little? (For reference only) Secondly, it is about the theme of the work. When I saw the author describing the internal relationship in the early stage, I always felt that the protagonist was alienated from the team. Later, due to the reduction of daily life within the team, this feeling was weakened a lot. What is particularly obvious is that the protagonist spends most of the time not mentioning the daily life of his teammates because he is ranking, which once again dilutes this sense of alienation. I don't comment on whether it's good or bad, I just feel that in e-sports, especially in League of Legends (MOBA), which focuses more on teamwork, communication between teammates is still necessary. It would also be good to add a little emphasis on description and abandon or gradually reduce the sense of alienation. Don't talk about the tacit cooperation between the middle and jungle. It's just a plain description in words without the foundation of daily and other exchanges. It always feels a little meaningless (personal opinion). Finally, it's the protagonist's own thoughts. Obviously, the protagonist changes from a rank player to a professional player. There is overall foreshadowing and time is spent to shape this character. This is good, not abrupt or blunt. But it's hard to see the protagonist's own thoughts. It's not accurate to say that. It should be said that the protagonist is currently playing games for money (personal opinion). It is out of standard to say this, but it feels like this to me. After analyzing it for a long time, the problem probably arises from how many times Lulu rewarded the protagonist for driving? In fact, who doesn't play professionally for money, but still wants to dress it up with a layer of e-sports spirit? For example, let's say the protagonist's goal is to win the S competition, and then mention his parents' concern and be proud of it? (For reference only) Overall, the look and feel is good. On a 100-point scale, it can be given a score of about 85. Good luck to the author (✪▽✪)

He can still fight back and forth in the game even if he is on or off. This protagonist is quite useless.

I feel like the more I write about the protagonist, the more I get. You said that the protagonist, in order to contribute to the team, withstands the pressure from the opponent's midfielder alone and allows the bottom lane to develop, but you don't see any suppressive power from the bottom lane. Brother Zaozi is already strong, right? You asked Xiangguo to live in the bottom lane to help, but I didn't see any advantage from you. Instead, you repeatedly suppressed the protagonist and wouldn't call anyone even if the team lost? Originally, the team was having fun, but you forced the protagonist to contribute to the team, which made the whole team seem more rigid to me. The protagonist looked even more seemingly inseparable, and thought he had to change teams.

Why is it written as rng again? As for the SB management of rng, the protagonist will be kept in rng and unable to get out. . .

The pen name adds up to five characters, starting with no, implying that Uzi is no good?

There is no future in RNG. If you win the puppy nb, you will take the blame if you lose.

With 1000 points of support, the writing is very nice.

I don't want to say anything, but in the finals, let two chase three, play SKT, Faker, the devil, "force" the fierce competition, you all understand it, you can experience it yourself.

The top of the canyon next door made a joke and was 100% auxiliary and poisoned a lot of popularity. Are they going to let the second one chase the third one here?

Zhou Shuyi? Real heroine? Don't scare me. It's hard to find a book to read.

It's a pity, I still like this book very much

Chapter 89, which I didn't say was good before, I actually revised it a long time ago, but I forgot to tell you. Chapter 301 will be revised tonight, and you can see the new version tomorrow. Sorry, bro.

Strawberry Flavored Lulu is the heroine, right?

? ? ? Entering the palace suddenly? There is no outline, just follow the idea... Don't you have some ideas for the follow-up...😰

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