Dream Keeper of All Realms

The process at the beginning was too fast, and some details were not explained, such as the protagonist's injuries, and whether the time inside the mirage is the same as outside. The following is very well written and explains everything that needs to be explained.

Oops, watching Li Chuba escape from danger, drinking milk and eating bread, I actually got hungry too!

I am a new writer, and the writing style of this novel is still very immature. But everyone who can read this novel is also welcome. Whether you think this is rubbish or you think it is barely worth watching, you are welcome to leave your comments or suggestions. Even if you just spray me, 😭 give me some interaction, okay? Come and spray me! Please!

The opening chapter is well written, and Li Chuba's entry into the void is wonderful! Come on, author, good book, good book!