God's Chess

I feel like I still need 10,000 words to get into the better part 😄 The opening is a bit big, and it's just laying the groundwork until now. Overall, it's pretty good.

Come on, your writing is much better than mine.

The beginning is very attractive, but the later part is a little confusing, and there are some questions. For example, after Lan Yue was taken away by the old Hanchuan tribe Shuofangyuan, the country's name was not changed. Nangong Xiu is so naughty, didn't his father give his mother a name? But overall it is okay. I just need to write it clearly. Of course, if I mention it later, just pretend I didn't say it.