Robbers in the Martial Arts World

Jin Baoyi's book was still a martial arts novel before the revision, but it is no longer a martial arts novel after the revision. That's the dark historical legend of the Han Dynasty! From the beginning of the Yue Nü Sword to the Book of Swords, all the Han dynasties, from the emperor down to the common people, were unfaithful, unfilial, shameless, ruthless and unjust. Everything that could be black was black. The Han and Tang Dynasties did not dare to write. Only the Manchu Emperor Kangxi Qianlong was the "sage" who had never been seen before or since! I have to say, the writing is as sharp as a knife! What a strategy, what a scheming, what a cleverness!

This start is unreasonable. Becoming Lu Bu's servant will allow you to do all kinds of things. In ancient times, domestic servants were divided into two types: those who were temporarily hired and those who had children in the family. The former were usually assistant farmers or a small number of guardians, while the latter were real servants, and their children and grandchildren were all servants. The protagonist looks like he will be adopted as a family and have children. It's impossible to open a restaurant or anything like that, let alone liquor. No one will waste food on you like that, and you can't do it even if your casting skills aren't up to par. Do you know what position Lu Bu held before the so-called chaos in the world? It is impossible to buy an official position. Once you are not famous and have no family background, the eunuchs will look down on you and even sell you an official position.

What can I say, the author is very perseverant. It's just that the writing style is not very good and needs to be improved. The plot design is awkward, boring and lacks tension. The introduction is quite attractive, but the content is not exciting enough.

As long as the author can justify himself reasonably, it doesn't matter how he writes. But I really can't stand that a humanoid nuclear bomb with a strength of 150,000 kilograms can still be injured in the martial arts world. In the fantasy world, a humanoid nuclear bomb with a strength of 150,000 kilograms is no small player. Do you understand the concept of 150,000 kilograms of strength? 😅😅😅 He can knock away dozens of tanks with one punch, and he can push flying intercontinental missiles back to the ground with his bare hands.

He is no longer Yin Zhiping, he has been changed to Zhen Zhiping. Yin Zhiping is a veritable Youdao Quanzhen. He has made great achievements in Taoism and often helped people during wars and disaster years. Understand medical skills, cure diseases and save people.

The poison started in the first chapter, the author is awesome👍

Everyone in The Condor is Li Yuanba. Even the protagonist with tens of tons of strength is not the strongest. Are they all cultivating immortals?

From the beginning, it is obvious that the protagonist is a character who would not survive three chapters under normal circumstances.

If you want to fight for world hegemony, why don't you try out how to do it in other worlds and just finish your martial arts and leave? In the main world, will you be able to handle government affairs and lead the army?

Why not change the title of the book to The Holy Mother in the Martial Arts World?

Wear it clean and don't rebel, use an electric drill as a chrysanthemum. This protagonist has three faults and only knows how to fall in love. . Abandoned

It's another routine of not waiting in the world of high martial arts and going to the novice area to pick up trash. . .

Let's not talk about whether the three views are righteous or not. Rebellion requires food and soldiers. The protagonist has been to so many worlds and doesn't want a single talent. He only wants to pick up girls and get through things. If he has the ability to rebel, he can give up if he doesn't.

Thank you everyone for your collection and comments. I will carefully read every suggestion and criticism you have. I will modify it if it feels reasonable! Thank you all!

The progress of the main world has always been a bit slow. It should be added to the main world's hegemony process while taking some time to clear the dungeons. Just like the main business and side hustle, there are too many dungeon worlds, giving people a feeling like the upgrade stream of the heavens. There is no sense of urgency at all for the bandits of the heavens to bring resources to fight for the main world hegemony. The world progresses. Process should be, if one person or thing is missing, the world process will undergo earth-shaking changes. Sometimes the impact of an advanced idea on the world process is immeasurable. For example, the world is an continuously extending straight line. No matter whether it is blocked in front or gently pulled at the end of the line, it will no longer be a straight line.

Authors need to be careful when writing novels! Hey, I have been killing and killing all my life. In the latest chapter, Yuan Shao was defeated. I don't know how to complain about it. How could there be such a shameless protagonist. Except for a fan writer who worshiped Yue Buqun as his disciple. He had profound secrets in his hand and did not contribute to his discipleship. The reason was that Yue Buqun was not a good person and was afraid of causing harm to the world. Instead, he took it out to exchange secrets with outsiders because he was afraid that the martial arts world would decline. I surpass his sister. The author you wrote is the second shameless protagonist. Author, please change it.

I was trolled like a dog, forget about the ending, no one will watch it anyway. Start writing the book and think about it before writing, otherwise you will still suffer and be criticized 😁

The protagonist is not a robber, the protagonist is the merciful Virgin Bitch. The protagonist of this book does not deserve the title of a vicious robber.

If this book didn't call the shots in the Three Kingdoms world, it would still be acceptable, but as long as it's associated with the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, it feels inexplicably inconsistent. Wang Yue is in the 6th realm, and then Guan Yu, Zhang Fei, Liu Bei, Huang Zhong, Zhao Yun, and Dian Wei Jia can resist together, my God. And Lu Bu is also at this level, so according to what you said, how can Sanying fight against Lu Bu? Ridiculous.

The poisonous points and slots are all flying together, no need to read it.

A good article about fighting for hegemony, turned into a martial arts version. It doesn't look like fighting for hegemony, and the martial arts is also messy.

It's too embarrassing to forcefully tease Huo Qingtong, I can't stand it anymore

Really, I feel that the protagonist is very capable of talking. If he wants to fight, he will fight. Before the fight, he will give a lot of past information 😅😅😅

It's too poisonous. I'm afraid you don't know the dignity and inferiority in ancient times. You'd have been beaten to death a long time ago.

What is it about being injured again and again and taking refuge in a copy or the main world?

Too few people knew about Book of Swords and Enmities, so it didn't get off to a good start. Even if you open Deer and Cauldron, many people will know about it. The results are definitely much better.

The dialogue between the characters is too taken for granted and naive, and there is so much embarrassment between the lines that I really can't read anymore.

The distorted history at the beginning persuaded me to give up

There has been no update on the situation for several days.

After reading only two chapters, I was persuaded to quit. I have a problem with literary youth, but I don't have any literary talent. I only watched the protagonist talk about Journey to the West. I used the plot of the TV series to describe it as the original work. The difference between the original work and the TV series is not small. If you want to take the path of literary youth, be a literary youth and do some research.