The World Once Loved You

Looking at it makes people feel comfortable and happy

A small story, a warm feeling, the author is great, the world also loved you.

Great work! Very thoughtful! Collected! Understand it! Come on! Welcome to visit us again!

Thanks to the friends who came to read the book. This is my second work. I have learned from the lessons of the first one and improved a lot. If you have any suggestions, please feel free to mention them. I will accept them humbly.

Every short story is very warm to read, and the author's writing style is also very good, making it easy to read. Some people seem to have exaggerated these advantages, so I won't repeat them one by one. What I mainly want to say is that I personally feel that these short stories are too independent. These are like separate short stories, with not much connection between them. Each short story is good on its own, but putting them under the same book will inevitably look stiff.        ，，//， But you need to pay attention to writing like this: the characters/plots between the stories are related; the ideas expressed by the stories should be similar or unified. It's like peeling an onion. Every time you write a story, you peel off a layer of skin. When the outer skin is peeled off layer by layer, the core of the story will eventually be left. It can be said that apart from the same setting and protagonist, each story in this book has nothing in common. In other words, its "form" is unified, but its "spirit" is somewhat scattered. In fact, when I first read it, I thought it was in the style of "Jieyou Grocery Store". The stories at the beginning were very scattered, but in the end, each story was connected to form a grand layout, giving the reader a sense of sudden enlightenment. But at present, it seems that the author does not have such an arrangement, and I don't know what he will write in the future. Because I feel that this kind of book by the author cannot be regarded as an online novel, or it is not suitable for online novels. This style, rhythm and theme make it more likely that I will take the publishing path. Therefore, I also give some suggestions based on the perspective of publishing a book. I may be biased, so please forgive me. Of course, if the author just wants to write some essays, diaries, etc., And has no idea of ​​​​creating a novel, then just ignore my words 🤭 The above are personal suggestions and are for reference only.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

A very novel writing technique. Come on.

The author's new book is very interesting. I will wait for the update slowly. 🥰🥰🥰🥰

I can't get enough of it. The author has just finished this book. When will he release a new book?😍