American Comic Alien Heroes

The subject matter is very good, but the writing style is not good, the writing is sloppy and eunuch... If it doesn't work, let me write it... I didn't plagiarize the story, I just borrowed the subject matter, there should be no problem, right?

The following is purely my own opinion. In the ben10 series, the most important thing about Tian Xiaoban's character is not his transformation. Especially after I re-watched it a while ago, this feeling became even stronger. After Tian Xiaoban got a small broken watch at the age of ten, we can see from the protagonist that he is brave, values ​​​​family ties, values ​​friendship, is responsible, helpful, and occasionally witty, and can make the right choice in the face of right and wrong. Moreover, the protagonist is very real, not hypocritical, and cannot be disliked. And it also reflects the protagonist's growth on the road of being a hero, although it is not obvious. When he was 16 years old and put on the little broken watch again, he obviously had a lot of worries. He knew that as long as he put on the little broken watch, he would have unparalleled abilities. The greater the ability, the greater the responsibility. As he grew up, he also understood that the responsibilities he shouldered were becoming more and more important. After all, he is just an ordinary earthling. He does not have any special abilities or skills, so he does not even want to wear a small broken watch again, because he wants to live an ordinary life, but when the real crisis comes, he still wears a small broken watch. Grandpa Mark's teachings from a young age have made him a very upright person and a responsible person. Maybe he has shortcomings of one kind or another, but once he puts on a small broken watch, he cannot allow himself to sit idly by. He is a hero, a hero with the knight's creed. Maybe he will be considered a saint because of his actions such as letting the enemy go and giving the enemy a chance, but this is exactly his bottom line. It is precisely because of these that we never have to worry about Tian Xiaoban going dark and becoming a dictator, a villain, or a villain. He has abilities after bringing Xiao Po Biao, and he has shouldered the responsibility because of Xiao Po Biao's ability. He has always followed the heroic code of a knight. The combination of all these truly makes him a hero famous in the universe and praised by the whole universe, a well-deserved hero. Once again, the 16-year-old plot of Xiao Po Biao can be said to be a history of the growth of a hero. Tian Xiaoban has been helpless, failed, and confused in this plot, but no matter what, he will stand up in the end and use his own way to solve all the problems in front of him. After turning 18, Xiaowen and Kevin left, and he had a new partner. By this time, he was already a qualified hero. He will not start a war, he will do his best to prevent it. Is he invincible? No, no, he has also encountered many difficulties, and he has also been in a dead end, but fortunately he has a group of friends he can rely on, so that he can perform reversals again and again, and miracles one after another. At this time, he was positive and optimistic, looking forward to the unknown tomorrow. At the same time, he also became more "nosy". He knew that he could not passively wait for the crisis, he must actively look for it and solve it.

X Superman, Yuan Neng Kong, Super Giant, Crystal Wizard, Four-Handed Overlord, Diamond God of War, Little Strange Soldier, Ghost Shadow, Quick Foot, Flash Star, Armadillo King Kong, Smart Ghost, Vampire, Swamp Fire, Ice Ghost, Polaris, Ray Man, Science Pterosaur, Divine Tyrannosaurus, Alien Monster, Thunderous Thunder, Electric Lizard. . . . There are really many alien heroes in ben10, and they are all unique.

Regarding the final evolution function, I suggest that it should be kept after subsequent version updates are obtained, and should not be deleted. Its own developability and potential are already a trump card.

To put it bluntly, Xiao Po Biao is not a weapon at all. Xiao Po Biao is a Noah's Ark that stores and records DNA samples of intelligent life in the universe. Once the universe suffers a huge crisis, a large number of intelligent races are exterminated, or there is a universal racial gene mutation, Xiao Po Biao can instantly resurrect intelligent races or repair and cure DNA damage and mutations by consuming a large amount of energy.

I hope the author can write it well, without eunuchs, and with good character design, without the brainless Long Aotian.

It's enough for the Omnitrix alien hero to fight Thanos. I hope there won't be any strange settings like genetic mutations. It's already strong enough but even if it strengthens the enemy, it won't be enough to defeat it. Will the enemies be strengthened later or strange settings be added to weaken the Omnitrix?

The three golden chapters of persuading people to quit. . . 😥

To be honest, I personally feel that Duan Lele is a failure. The character setting is not outstanding, and the image is not good. It can even be said to be a burden. As the author, your writing power is obviously not enough. It is best not to have any main plots or important side plots with this character in the later period. Occasionally make a guest appearance and be a small easter egg. Otherwise, the author will be scolded if you do not grasp it well.

By the way, the protagonist is a primary school student who has traveled through time. He is always afraid and frightened, and he shows it so obviously. His psychological quality is not as good as Tian Xiaoban 😅

I've wanted to read ben10's fan fiction before Does anyone recommend other fan fiction? (ºº )

I didn't expect that someone would start writing Ben10 at Qidian. It's amazing. This is the first time I've seen it. 👴🏻Youth is back. It's a pity that the anime lost its flavor after the fourth season. Harmful. 👴🏻I still remember the theme song. "It's so amazing to be invincible at such a young age..."

I finally found a book about small broken watches. The author writes well.

Oh oh oh, I'm so disappointed, it's rotten again🐶

I really like ben10, hope you write well

Do you think Superman X is an all-powerful universe-level boss?

I think we can change the color of the small broken watch. Red or blue would be cooler.

Shadow Ghost is still very strong. In one episode, he turned most of the people on Morgas' planet into his subordinates.

It's been almost a month since the update, why hasn't it been updated yet?

It's very beautiful. Why is it a eunuch?

Hello! No! Don't stop updating, I still want to read it, the author will be back soon~

Update! ! !

Writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Eunuch, bro

Update update update!