Sword Immortal Who Joined the Chat Group

What are you writing about in such a mess? The realm is flitting eastward and westward. The author is just like starting to write a novel after watching the 5-minute explanation of Naruto and Fate/Stay Night. It's a mess. 🤔At least a few of them can match up. It's really weird to see.

The protagonist doesn't even know the plot, yet he's just reading the thread and slipped away…………:

The code is incomprehensible and messy. ✅

The protagonist should not be called the Sword Immortal, but the Sword Demon. He actually captures a child and dissects him. Such a person is either a fairy or a devil.

Introduction The Dragon Roaring Sword retreats from the cold pool, and the sword sits in the box and sings wildly!

I never say anything bad about the author when I read a book, but I just randomly caught the children of the ghost lantern clan and conducted dissections for experiments. I had a bit of a disagreement. I couldn't stand it any longer, so I left.

The author should cut it off and rewrite a serious chat group article. If you can't write a Xiucha fan article, it's okay to practice! It's a bit abnormal to have just these few posts with more than 300 chapters, and your book is really messy.

Don't change your worldview. I said before that I have never met the woman who just traveled through time and didn't want to get married. Later, it turned out that marriage is actually consented and only after seeing an immortal can I not get married. It was said earlier that the world time of the chat group is the same, but later it becomes a chat group of several decades and a few months, and it is still the same world as the friends of the chat group.

The person who traveled through time doesn't even know basic information, are you trying to play him as a basilisk?

The author's writing style is quite passable. But it's not good if your novel doesn't have a main plot. Even if it is prose, the form and spirit should remain intact. If the author changes the topic or doesn't write it at all, you are not the only one who will be disappointed at the beginning. You don't need this if you want to make money.

Seghart?

It's so messy that I don't even know what I'm writing. The typing process is written like a running account.

This writing is really awkward. I have to go out to the normal earth as a time traveler. I don't know that Konoha has been transported by a group of people. Is it your first time to travel? It's better to just worry about the identity of the time traveler.

I have abandoned the book. I couldn't stand it after reading a few. The overall IQ is low. Light novels do not mean low IQ. The author's creative ideas need to be improved. Everyone is like a fool, and the story is boring. Goodbye!

This is a story about cultivating immortality wrapped in the shell of a chat group. The focus is on cultivating immortality. From time to time, some words about the daily life of the group members are inserted to break up a coherent story, so it cannot be written.

The author, I would like to encourage you and hope you will work hard. Use this book as a writing practice! I decided to change my career and stop writing books. The author is not angry, right?

The Sun Wukong in Super Seminary is not the one in mythology, right?

This guy told me that he was traveling through time. Are you sure he's not an aborigine? Isn't this the indigenous counterattack version

Such a rubbish book can still contain more than 400 pages, which is awesome.

The more I look at it, the more I don't understand. Maybe it's because I jumped to watch it. What is the realm? There is also a small ninja who traveled through the land and became an immortal in three years. Don't tell me that I'm a mortal, but if I become a half-immortal and become an immortal, I'm in the third realm? What about writing a bunch of Japanese comics? It's hard to read the names, and I've never seen most of them. And in the Chinese comics, you can make a mistake of 7,000 years old and change it to 3,000. I don't even know how many mistakes you can make later. Chinese mythology, Chinese fantasy novels, and platinum writers are all not enough for you to write?

Are you stupid? The time traveler doesn't know the plot? Didn't you complete the outline?

Let me complain, Substitution Technique is not Space Ninjutsu

How to say it? Why did you join the chat group? Wouldn't it be better to just travel through time? To change the tone, your writing is so bad?

There are more than 400 pictures and 44 vertical book reviews. The author should be popular. He has good perseverance. After all it should be popular sooner or later. Come on

An urbanite who doesn't read novels?

The plot is said to be coherent, but its preface does not match the epilogue It is said to be incoherent, and it can be clearly seen how much is missing.

It's so poisonous that the male protagonist goes in and is forcibly captured to do a group mission. The reward for completing the mission is not given to the male protagonist. The benefits of being treated as a slave in the chat group belong to others. Moreover, you have to write forty or fifty chapters for a single crappy mission. What are you doing?

Why are the protagonist and his master so disgusting? It's so weird. One moment he pretends to be a good guy, and the next he becomes more of a murderer than a murderer. It feels like schizophrenia.