I'm Building a Copycat in Song Dynasty

Although the writing is very good, the setting is very funny. The first is the Meng family's mansion, which is even more luxurious than the protagonist's home. You must know that the protagonist's father has just died. The Meng family, which used to be just a subordinate, can suddenly build a large mansion. In ancient times, it took three to five years to build a mansion. Wouldn't it be surprising that his father would not get news? The Meng family is only equivalent to professional managers, only receiving a fixed salary. The Liulichang belongs to the protagonist's family. Where did the Meng family get the money to build the house? Have you never doubted it? Secondly, as a wealthy family, the accounting offices in the family are all passed down from generation to generation, and the subordinates who manage the accounting office are trained as study companions from childhood, and can cultivate loyalty. It would not be too abrupt to suddenly appoint Zhao, who has an unknown background, as the accounting office. Even if he saves his life without knowing it, the protagonist's father will not be able to trust him in a short time. To be honest, the subject matter of this book is very good, but deliberately creating such an unreasonable setting for the protagonist at the beginning will dissuade many people. Today's readers' reading level has improved, and it is no longer like the Internet literature industry ten years ago where no one complained about various strange settings. After all, there was no book review function before.

The writing is quite good, but the protagonist is made to look like an idiot, which is terrible.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I have to say that the author's writing style is very good, especially in the narration and scene description. However, the dialogue between the characters, especially... The pig's feet, looks a bit silly and sweet 😂😂😂, and the writing style collapsed instantly 😂

Hahaha, in one morning, you got 5 more fans😂, come on, author 😁

The writing is good, but the plot is too sadistic. I don't expect the protagonist to be invincible, but don't embarrass the time traveler, okay?

The author can wow, he has gained more than 7,000 followers overnight, come on 😁😁

There is something in this writing, come on, boss! (Almost dissuaded by the title)

Overall it's okay but the details are too thin. The war is poorly written. In ancient times, there was a war involving 600,000 people. How long does it take to prepare for a war to annihilate a country, how many companies and battalions need to be moved, and how many war methods are used. It can be solved by firing gunpowder guns from time to time.

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Brother, how much push did you get?

Good book Write according to your own wishes Who said time travel means you are invincible. They all regard the ancients as fools. The twenty-year-old bookworm supports me!

This is the weakest and stupidest protagonist I have ever seen in a historical novel. A small landowner dares to make muskets on the land of the Jin people. The government knows that it will be a crime of beheading immediately, and the protagonist's character is so weak that it is outrageous. There will be recommendations for this kind of novel. I don't know how many sailors I have bought.

The author just asks you whether the protagonist will rebel and become emperor, or not.

120,000 Recommendation votes, you want to read it, but you can't look directly at the comment area.

The Kindness of a Woman, the main character is so holy that the mob doesn't even screen. If there is a leader causing trouble and no weapons, does it matter if there are weapons? Give you a fatal blow at the critical moment

The writing is very good. If you write it according to your own ideas and write your own characteristics, I believe it will get better and better.

This recommendation vote is too blatant, right?

This book is generally good, okay, but there are some common flaws in this kind of book. One is that it is impossible to win a field battle with muskets against cavalry. The reason why Senggelinqin's Mongolian cavalry was defeated in the late Qing Dynasty was because they used cavalry to attack machine gun positions. During the Long March of the Red Army, weapons were a century more powerful than muskets. , But just like that, the Red Army's West Route Army was completely wiped out, and was defeated by the Ma's cavalry. Moreover, in Jet Li's performance, there was an example of them using infantry to defeat muskets. Of course, that was because the enemy had few muskets. The muskets could only fire two to three rounds at most when charging the cavalry, and the cavalry could also fire arrows. The second flaw is that at the beginning of the rebellion, the wages and pensions given to recruits were too high. In fact, there should be orphans recruited at any time. Such people do not need pensions if they die. Those who find the body are counted as killed, and those who cannot find are counted as missing. Missing and Pensions for those killed in battle are different. Moreover, refugees almost have nothing but their lives. As long as they give their families a good life, these people will fight with their lives. A pension of 500 yuan is equivalent to hundreds of thousands today, and it will be lost in one battle. The third is that the barrel of the musket will heat up if it can't be fired too many times, and weapons similar to grenades should not be too powerful based on the ability of the protagonist's arsenal at the moment. I remember that during the Anti-Japanese War, the Huangyadong Arsenal only produced more than 300 rifles a month, and because there was no cold rolling mill, it could not heat up if it was fired too many times. When he saw the sword, Li Yunlong complained that the grenade was not very powerful, and sometimes exploded in half.

When you catch the leader of the rebels, you still don't keep strict supervision, and you let them run away if they want. How long have you traveled through time and you still haven't changed your mind? What about civil rights and humanity in troubled times, for fear of imprisoning people? They became good friends the second after they were alive or dead. Good friends are so superficial and never thought about putting themselves in someone else's shoes. If the rebels capture you who killed so many other people's brothers, will they look good on you? Just arrest him and behead him, okay? It's like feeding him poison. Do you want to rebel immediately and pretend I didn't say anything? Otherwise, if the bandit leader escapes, you really don't care about the imperial court decapitating him?

The writing is getting better and better, mainly due to being dragged down by the public chapters. The main character is too useless. If the author repairs it... Well, I guess it will need to be greatly repaired, and the structure will be completely broken... Well, the operation is too big😁... If you dare to write it, I dare to read it, don't go into the palace.

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The author's writing is very good, and he obviously has the potential to become a great god. Why does he have to create such a mentally retarded character and plot? You can refer to successful historical articles. The protagonist's position must be clear and decisive. It is best to write fewer women. The more women there are in historical articles, the worse the results.

The main line should be more prominent. The author needs to be clear about the direction of the pig's feet, whether it is technology, military, or both.

The structure has been laid out very well. As long as you follow the steps step by step, you can write two to three million words without any bottlenecks. Don't do it too deliberately, especially when it comes to lowering intelligence, deliberately pretending to be x and slap people in the face, etc. This book will save some character and wait for the next part to correct the shortcomings of this book. It should be good. The future is bright 🤭🤭🤭

Is your protagonist thinking with his crotch? ? The girl comes first? Why do you still care about her when you have trouble with a girl?

Ah ah ah, I'm so excited, I finally have a new book, I'm looking forward to it 😁😁

I like this book. It feels very warm and enjoyable. I must recommend it!

I'm curious if your recommendation votes were swiped?

Writing two books in a row, the author is a bit stressed in the later stage, so I will save some chapters first