The Monk Who Traveled Through the Heavens

After returning to modern society, I always feel that there is something wrong. The protagonist can cure cancer, but he cannot promote mass treatment. You charge 10,000 yuan, which is too natural. Not talking about the world, how many cancers are there in the country? What can you do if you treat one or two people a day? Who can't afford 10,000 yuan now? In the end, this treatment quota cannot be given to ordinary patients. They must be rich and powerful, or scalpers who take advantage of it. Moreover, they will not appreciate your kindness, but will only appreciate the scalpers' kindness. Ordinary patients will also blame you for serving the rich and powerful, and not being able to please both ends. Cancer itself is painful. You let ordinary people see hope (10,000 yuan to cure cancer), but they can't touch it (you are not capable enough). This inability to touch is still caused by yourself. If you don't resent it, who do you resent? However, these problems can be completely avoided by setting a relatively high treatment fee, such as 10 million. Ordinary people see that treatment requires 10 million. Although they know that cancer can be cured, they may delay the treatment in ordinary hospitals (waiting for the protagonist's ability to improve), or simply accept their fate (they are not capable enough and do not make so much money). They will never blame the protagonist. Similarly, if those powerful people are treated, it will be a friendship of 10 million yuan. It's not that if you set the price low, people will thank you.

An ordinary person just hopes to have a shelter And Master Fang De established a paradise to protect the poor at the foot of Songshan Mountain in this chaotic martial arts world. This book may have many shortcomings, but the spiritual core is something I recognize. Will accompany the author until the end. I would like to make a small comment, I don't write a book, it would be ridiculous: the author does a good job of incorporating construction factors into the book about rivers and lakes, but the construction factors are too little in the book, and the focus is still on the rivers and lakes. This is actually out of touch with the master character established by the author. In fact, there are many places where the author can strengthen the farming plot and turn this martial arts battle series into a martial arts farming series (plus ideological enlightenment and scientific research on martial arts). Just like the witch farming series, he can write an epic of Xiaoao farming style.

The writing is not very good. Some places are wrong and the sentences have many flaws. It is not recommended to read it.

Not to mention whether the writing is good or not, there are too many typos to count, and there are also missing words in some places. It is not smooth to read at all. Look at the second paragraph, not to mention other typos.

I'm convinced, the content is okay, but there are so many typos that I can't stand it.

I've seen less than ten of them and I can't stand it any longer. Let me start by saying that I am not here to troll people, lie and get hit by a car when I go out. First of all, you travel through a martial arts world. At any rate, you should have a normal martial arts thinking and a system for practicing and upgrading skills. When you write about the world of Swordsman, you must at least respect the martial arts system of the gold system of Swordsman. I was so fucking drunk when I saw the integration of Chinese martial arts, and the combination was neither fish nor fowl. The author also claimed that internal energy comes from life energy, so practicing Chinese martial arts can enhance the source of internal energy. The martial arts of the metal system are ranked first in internal strength from beginning to end. How can you explain Duan Yu and Xu Zhu with this theory of internal strength that you have come up with? Those old immortals who co-authored the Xiaoyao sect, with such high internal strength, must all of them be losers?

I have been in seclusion for 1000 years. I came out of seclusion today. I observed the celestial phenomena and realized that the revival of spiritual energy is coming. I came here to pass on this blessing. There are 2 secret books. Those who are destined can practice it by themselves

Do you really think Shaolin Temple doesn't eat meat? Are those monks who don't eat meat so good at practicing? Especially those who practice external martial arts!

I actually like books where the main character is a monk, but your book is a bit disappointing.

I can tell at a glance that you are not a human being, the mighty heavenly dragon, the world-honored Ksitigarbha

The poison has been tested. There are multiple names of the protagonists, Xu De, Xu Da, and Fang De. It can be seen that this must be a copycat. The author is too ambitious, so he must be serious when copying.

This is a Madonna novel, don't read it if you resist. Let me tell you a joke. The protagonist follows others to crusade against the dark forces. People on his side die casually, but the protagonist will never kill an enemy. The reason is that monks are compassionate and do not kill people indiscriminately. When friendly troops die, he pretends not to see them. The opponent sends a bunch of ordinary men to besiege the protagonist, but the protagonist does not kill any of them. There are countless casualties on his own side, but he does not kill any, and he is still upright and upright.

Chinese martial arts is really poisonous! Don't say anything about reality! Take the novel as an example, it should be in this order! The innate aura of cultivating immortality → degenerating into the acquired aura of cultivation → degenerating into the spiritual and internal energy of martial arts → all disappearing and leaving no other option but to practice the martial arts of qi and blood → finally turning into a routine for street performers! This is a deterioration that is getting worse and worse, so the brains of martial arts masters are squeezed by the door! ! Someone can kill you with a palm from a few meters away. If you want to get close to someone and use Qinggong, you won't even be able to catch their shadow! Even if you're close, you can't hurt the opponent even if you fight for a long time due to their true energy protecting the body. They can stab you to death with just one finger! ! Don't talk about external skills like the Dragon Subduing Palm in martial arts. They are from the outside in, and the internal power is generated by itself!

The protagonist's golden finger is actually the main god who was banned in the previous book, but I don't know if it can be repaired after being taken away by the 404 god.

Third-rate, second-rate, first-rate, super first-rate, the classification is not good, just like if you were assigned third, sixth or ninth grade in the same grade, how would outsiders know? Look at Jin Yong, all of them are ants innately. The five great talents in the world represent the geniuses who are innately famous. The representative figures, Yang Guo, Guo Jing, Qiao Feng, etc., Where did they come from? When writing novels, the author uses his brain to think, think over and over, think from different roles, and think over and over again. Otherwise, the novel will not read smoothly and you will not make money. Competition in today's society is fierce. If you don't pay attention, some people will leave you alone.

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What makes me most unhappy is that the protagonist has become a real monk from body to brain. He is merciless in every aspect, but he has become a relatively pedantic monk. If he catches someone from the demon sect, he can just kill him and give him his mother. Forget it

It's not that I don't believe in Chinese martial arts, it's that Chinese martial arts really stretch my hips nowadays. Just a bunch of liars. The real martial arts is completely invisible. I'm saying, if you really work hard, you can make money early. Don't talk about killing skills that are not allowed to be practiced in the country, but people still practice archery. Muay Thai also kills people, so it's still taught.

I don't think there are any books to recommend in Sanjiang. These books are all available.

In fact, kindness is the most basic thing when writing about monks, but it would be very frustrating to write a protagonist who doesn't understand any Buddhism or wisdom. The second volume returns to modern times. Normal people know the consequences of showing medical powers. If the author had written the protagonist's compassionate character of "I don't go to hell, who will go to hell," I guess no one would be disgusted. But the result is that he is like a country boy with no knowledge, and it is really unbearable.

Do sentient beings need you to save them? ? ? ? What makes you feel that you are superior to others and that all sentient beings need you to save them? ? ? You'd better ask the monk to plant more land, thank you! ! ! ! !

What your martial arts cannot do, my Chinese martial arts can do it for you. Your martial arts cannot break the void, but my Chinese martial arts can break it. Your martial arts cannot be immortal, but our Chinese martial arts are immortal. Practicing martial arts and cultivating immortals cannot compete with the saints. Our Chinese art of Xingyi Tai Chi beat the saints to vomit blood. You ask me who I am, I am a heir of Chinese martial arts with a history of hundreds of years.

The protagonist is a true virgin who will sacrifice herself for others. She is not very likable and has a weak sense of empathy.

Seeing that now there is only the Vajra Indestructible Body Divine Skill and Arhat Fist, but Xiaoao has not learned a single light skill in decades? They all circled around the protagonist and found that he couldn't be killed. Then they dodge with Qinggong. The protagonist stared at him. How stupid is this protagonist?

I saw a lot of people talking about Our Lady, but I gave up the book after reading Chapter 6. The protagonist wanted to verify the effectiveness of the Chinese martial arts in the previous life novel in the world of Swordsman, so he experimented with a few-year-old child from a village at the foot of the Shaolin Temple. It has only been a few years since a modern ordinary person traveled to the world of Swordsman, and he has stayed in the Shaolin Temple for the past few years and never left. He only practiced the Boy's Kung Fu and the third level of the Vajra Indestructible Magic Kung Fu. In his previous life, he did not understand Chinese martial arts, so he read a few novels about Chinese martial arts. In his previous life, he was not a human biology scientist, and Golden Finger was not a combination of martial arts deductions or the like. It's like a novice in martial arts uses children of several years old to do experiments, just to satisfy his guess about guoshu. The author also said that the protagonist reads a thousand novels every year. In guoshu novels, the boxing techniques seem to have to be practiced by a master. Indiscriminate practice of guoshu will kill people. Is this kind of protagonist a virgin? I am so selfish at heart and don't care about human life. I wrote it in this chapter.

Haven't read this book. But I wanted to post my thoughts on the comment section. How should I put it, 60% of them are negative reviews. All kinds of differences. Sometimes the main character is the Virgin. Sometimes the protagonist becomes a monk. Sometimes I don't like Buddhism. There are all kinds. I am actually very picky when it comes to reading. As long as it's not too much. What I'm saying is not exaggerating, that is. Don't ruin your three views. I don't recommend any more books like Master Gu. Such books can easily be anti-human. What is the right way to kill your wife? I won't read this kind of inhumane book either. As for the harem story. I watched it too when I started. But then I discovered a problem. Time traveler. Especially those who have gone through nine years of compulsory education. To be honest, I just want to ask them. Why did you wear it? For your lower body? I can't walk when I see a beautiful girl. And those authors. A lot of description. His skin is like gelatin, his fingers are like onions, and so on. To be honest, I have also fantasized about it. But I fantasized about the ending. What you are talking about is not human at all. It is beside the point. Read the introduction to this book. It still feels good. Of course, an introduction cannot be an introduction. Represents the full text. I'll take a look first. As for the Holy Mother and the monks, they don't like people like Buddhism. I feel like there's something wrong with them. What you call Our Lady does not mean what you think Our Lady is. Holy Mother is a good word. But now it's been said bad. Like a homebody. Or like a straight man. Have become derogatory terms. As for not liking Buddhism. My mother is a Buddhist, and my father and I are non-believers. But there's nothing wrong with living together. For Buddhists, I prefer Taoism. Just because you don't like it doesn't mean others don't like it. Don't keep your emotions private. Bring it to the comments. Of course, you can also bring some when commenting. For example, let's say the protagonist is a scumbag. Or something like that. A book that destroys the three views. The harsher this appeal is, the better. The emergence of this kind of book. It will only ruin people's outlook. Then educate a group of anti-human beings.

Is this book a hit? Monk? ! ! Everything about Buddhism is rejected by readers, but if it is written about, can readers have a sense of involvement?

Kindness is separate from weakness. One moment you are a great monk, and the next moment you become a weak Madonna.

If you dress up as a martial artist and can write about things that should be in the martial arts world, you can accept the fantasy you write, and you can be a good knight and do justice, isn't it? If you are doing farming, why don't you use a steam engine?

I remember, I have read this book. The protagonist is simply the Holy Mother of Holy Mothers. It is considered the first world. After reading it, I returned to the main world and I really couldn't stand it anymore, so I deleted it.