The Chinese Summoning System of Cangwu Continent

Let's talk about your feelings and opinions. The book is so good so far. There are not many poisonous points but they are harmless. The only embarrassing point that is easy to dissuade is from the time Qin Shubao stops Chang Shiwan from killing prisoners until the end. The lines and actions arranged by the author for Qin Qiong should be the words and deeds of the protagonist, who has just traveled through time and has some naive thoughts in modern times. He is kind but not in charge of soldiers. The characters who can leave their names in history almost do not have too much kindness as a woman. Furthermore, the protagonist gets things too smoothly, which shortens the length of the story. The attributes of all summoned characters that have appeared so far are over 90, and they are all first-rate. However, heroes have their own uses as heroes, and villains have their uses as villains. Adding some second-rate, third-rate, and inferior characters will also give you an unexpected feeling. Furthermore, we need to create some first-class heroes with over 100 attributes as opponents for the native continent. They can have historical prototypes, but don't use those opponents who are crazy and come in as the protagonist. If there are too many people writing like this, it will become cliché. Furthermore, the summoned characters can have some endings such as death or sacrifice. Invincible recommendation, a story without twists and turns is as boring as a scenery without ups and downs. That's all my opinions for now. Whether you are willing to adopt them or you are too lazy to pay attention to them, the author is still you after all. Follow your own path, and read some suggestions to eliminate poisonous points. Many people will always walk a longer road than one person, so go for it.

If you feel that the ability values ​​of some characters in the book are relatively low, please leave a comment. I will consider whether modifications are needed based on everyone's feedback Modification method: If it has no impact on the content, it can be adjusted directly. If it has an impact on the content, some scenes can be added later and appropriately enhanced.

I want to know if anyone is reading my book, or am I just reading it alone🤔