Something Big Happened in the World of Cultivation

1. The rhythm is brisk and gives people a comfortable feeling. 2. The length is neat and clean, and the narrative is smooth and natural. 3. The characterization is very good ฅ(*°ω°*ฅ)*❤️ 4. I like this sentence: Everyone in the world is unbreakable, and beauties wear painted skin on their faces~ 5. The little fox is interesting, the purple smoke is interesting, and the writing style is appropriate. 6. Then there is my personal opinion. There are fewer ups and downs and the whole article is more interesting. If it is all like this, does it feel a little bit? How to say it? Let it be plain! This blandness is not the article, but the plot. The ups and downs are a little smaller, just like the kind that makes you tired after watching too much. My personal opinion, please forgive me. 7. The plot can be advanced a little faster. Make it a little more surprising and the appeal will be stronger. In fact, there are no problems in general. Some of the problems are my own opinions and I have specially picked them out. They may be a bit tricky, hehe ฅ(*°ω°*ฅ)* The book... Coke, the author is~excellent, keep up the good work❤️

Big rush, second bestseller list 👍👍👍

Congratulations! A meteoric rise! May you become a god soon! I wasn't very optimistic about this book at first. There is no main line in sight. And the first few chapters have a bit of a dark feel to them. I read it recently when I had time and found it very interesting. It's completely different from "Love Between Breaths". After reading the testimonial written by Shenxian Taotao, I somewhat understood the relationship between the two books. They are all stories about big people and small people under disaster. I discovered that Taotao is very good at shaping characters. Each character has his own characteristics. He is also particularly good at writing sadistic dramas. There are not many emotional scenes, but they are all touching and sad. The Jade Emperor is somewhat similar to Zhong Zhiwen. Although the character status and personality are not the same. Come on! 🌹 Reward support.

I like it so much! ! Please keep it up! I will support it to the end. Come on Oli!

I like it so much,,, I beg you to make more of it! I will support it to the end. . . Come on Ollie. . O(*￣￣*)o

Congratulations on your promotion to Qingyun❤️❤️❤️

It turns out there is another book, hahaha, I need to add a bookshelf 😄🌹

I'm speechless. I've always voted for recommendations on time. If you don't update on time, you might as well change the status 😢

The writing is great and the content is quite attractive. I'm in the process of updating... Come on 🌹

Come on, keep updating every day.

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The writing style is really delicate, I have to steal from him 😥

I thought of a picture of two people hugging each other, one person looking into the distance, and the other person closing his eyes and listening. Where is the love? The writing is very good, the sentences are fluent, and the description of the environment and the shape of the characters are very picturesque. The world view is very grand, like watching a mythical story, where humans, gods, and demons coexist, and the choice of becoming a demon or cultivating an immortal... It's just... Where can there be so many just? Reading novels is just a matter of fun. I'm not asking you to find wrong sentences or do reading comprehension. Why didn't I see you so active when I was learning Chinese? I am just a person listening to the story. The bench has been placed. The author is great. You can continue.

Happy National Day! Happy Mid-Autumn Festival! Wish you all the best and all your wishes come true! I will always support you 🌹

This is the second time I watched the female channel. I didn't expect it to be good. I just want to see if there will be an update. I'll definitely support it if there are more chapters.

Loyal book fans, I hope you will be more refined. Daily recommendation votes are indispensable.

Nice! Very cute! Come on!

Bestseller 28, has potential, I'll take it now, I'll take a look after the holidays