Staying Home in the Worlds of the Heavens

In the author's last book, the protagonist first destroyed the Song Dynasty and then surrendered to the Mongols, euphemistically saying that God's will cannot be violated. In fact, doesn't it all depend on the author whether the plot can be changed? Isn't the Providence behind a book the author himself? If the protagonist is allowed to travel through time in a novel, but the plot cannot be changed, what's the point of this time travel? He also destroyed the Song Dynasty and surrendered to Mongolia. Shame on this author forever. Seeing that the protagonist of this book is this kind of salty fish who is greedy for life and afraid of death, he probably has the same moral character as the protagonist of this book. I really don't know what the point of this kind of author writing this kind of book is. It won't be popular for a hundred years. It's better to get out of the circle as soon as possible to avoid polluting the readers' eyes.

No matter how good the writing is, 99% of readers will be wiped out if you write about Yi Tian at the beginning.

Alas, why write a golden book? The author has never read the novel, at least not understood it. Fortunately, I don't know whether it was due to good luck or knowing this hidden clumsiness, so I didn't pay too much attention to the plot. But for true martial arts fans, it is still full of loopholes. Other than this, the connection between volumes one and two is even more of a joke. The world of Swordsman is an extension of the previous world. It is still the same as the original book. Even the names of the supporting characters have not changed? Never heard of the butterfly effect? This is not because I don't understand the original work, but because I don't have common sense. And Dongfang Bai, well, he is so brave. He just watched a TV series and then wrote a novel about the world of Golden Book. Moreover, the worst TV series was chosen. Yu Zheng's adaptation was originally illogical. The author's approach is like writing a Three Kingdoms novel after watching John Woo's bad movie Red Cliff

Personal comments: In the beginning, it was an old-fashioned martial arts world of relying on heaven and slaying dragons. To be honest, there was basically nothing wrong with the handling (nothing wrong, the major poison points are already very good. Reading more poison books will increase drug resistance), which made people want to continue reading. In the end, the second world is proud of the world? ? ? ? I wonder if your writing was not bad at first? Didn't do your homework? Why can't I stop thinking about writing Swordsman? Swordsman is a magical world where you can write nine and a half out of ten books. Anyone who has done a little homework knows that the silly and silly author who just copied and pasted it is also a bad money maker. Swordsman World can be very straightforward and say that no one writes well. Some people like Linghu Chong, some hate Linghu Chong, some like to watch the destruction, and some don't want to be disrupted in the future. The polarization is the most serious. See clearly that it is polarization. It is not a thousand people with a thousand tastes. If you prefer one part, you will inevitably lose the other part. If you try to balance it, if you please both sides, you will end up not pleasing both sides. If you do a little homework, you won't be able to write "Swordsman". If you still write after doing it, I can only say that the author is stubborn. Final conclusion: From my current point of view, this book has begun to have a different character design. If the author is not strong enough in writing later, he will not be able to change the negative impact of Swordsman, and it will only become a little bit boring, and in all likelihood it will end up on the street.

What the hell is it about? Ximen Chuixue sharpened his sword for seven years and became invincible. The protagonist has been sharpening his sword for decades. A minion can fight with the protagonist for a long time. The protagonist is too piggy. Immortality is of no use. If you live for a long time, you will live like a dog. The author is really bad. Look at the characteristics of those masters with swords. Jing Ke kills with ten steps and seeks defeat alone. The grass and trees connect swords, Ye Gucheng's Flying Immortal from Heaven, Ximen Chuixue's sword blows blood, Yan Shisan's Fifteen Swords of Death, The Nameless Ten Thousand Swords Return to the Clan, and Dugu Jian's Twenty-Three Swords. When I look at the protagonist, he still practices swordsmanship. I think the author only practices swordsmanship. If you don't draw a tiger, you'll become a dog. Even Zhao Min, the most outstanding and the first heroine in Yitian, is directly given a box lunch? So what does the protagonist do when he travels across Yitian? Blind writers don't even know what they're writing about, right? If you don't have writing skills, just write out the outline first.

Xiaoao is really bad. Seeing that the Demonic Cult unified the Jianghu and refused to allow Wudang to stop it, I don't believe that the Demonic Cult can unite the Jianghu and not oppress the people? No burning, killing and looting? Also, Dongfang Invincible was taught by the protagonist to have the strength and not stop him. There is also some cause and effect for the demon sect harming the protagonist.

Copy your own and write it once, it's easy to make money

Kneeling down and licking Manqing basically makes them cold, no exceptions

Is the author giving up? You can write whatever is poisonous to you. Xiaoao is extremely poisonous. Are you Emperor Shitian? Playing with the world, do you know how Emperor Shakten died? That's a joke.

It's so poisonous. Zhang Sanfeng asked you to practice, but you thought it was too fast. You have never practiced martial arts. Are your theoretical knowledge better than Zhang Sanfeng's?