A New World of Spirit Pets

The author has been working on it for a long time. Until now, I have forgotten what the protagonist's golden finger is. It was only when I turned to the beginning that I remembered that there is another golden finger.

The snail is suitable for the control and defense route, mainly because of its mucus and shell. I hope the author can make good use of these characteristics of the snail.

I finally understand why the protagonist is a snail pet. Isn't the update speed like a snail?

Why is there always such a routine? Why do encounters always happen on the way to the exam? Just forget about it and write so many chapters.

What the hell is Yang Xiaoming? Forget it while you're dead, there are so many things going wrong. They all caught up with the words and the law. It has no use other than making you feel sick.

The introduction is so good, but you just waste it

Why do a bunch of rookies who have just changed careers compete so much?

My intuition tells me that the recent plot is not very good. If it is not handled well, or if the reversal is not enough, it can be regarded as a poisonous point. I plan to keep it for a while... Also, the protagonist is the son of luck, but the author does not overly reflect the profound characteristics of luck in this book. Instead, he uses some things that are not helpful in terms of guessing and winning. Having deep luck means having your wishes come true to a certain extent, but I only saw the author suppressing the protagonist in order to forcefully create excitement. Although I don't like this kind of plot, I have to say that not being selected for the first place in the college entrance examination really made me empathize. Then about Yang Xiaoming, I have an opinion: the protagonist and Yang Xiaoming have become best friends. A person with deep luck will not meet a person with extremely bad luck, unless this person is of great use to the protagonist, but I really don't see it now. It has always been Yang Xiaoming who is using the protagonist's good luck to avoid disasters. Competitors are not like competitors. If Yang Xiaoming is strengthened and made to be evenly matched with the protagonist, this will have a promoting effect. Also because of his character, Yang Xiaoming comes from an ordinary background and can even be considered poor. Generally speaking, children from poor families become masters early, but Yang Xiaoming does not show this at all. After all, he needs to be more mature. The special thing is that Yang Xiaoming has bad luck, but it is not the kind of bad luck, it is just ordinary luck. The description in the article is too much, and it directly becomes a prophecy. I think it is too exaggerated!!! The above are some things that I think are wrong, and then there is the plot of this paragraph that I don't dare to read, because so far, I still like this book very much. Although it does have many shortcomings, it also has many advantages. It is recommended that the author think about the plot carefully, try to be as detailed as possible, and not take it too seriously. After all, writing a novel requires rationality! Well, in summary, the author needs to think carefully about the plot and settings. (Because I am a settings control person... I am quite sensitive about settings.)

Is there something wrong with Yang Xiaoming? When he was attacked on the way to Tianjiang County, so many people were ready to sacrifice for their sake, but he was still so relaxed and even joking

It looks good, but it's a bit sparse. I'll keep it for a while. I hope I won't be a eunuch when I watch it.