Looking at Panshengzi and Never Forgetting It

One recommendation ticket every day, haha

How should I put it, I have read the novel a little bit, so let me break the zero comments first. There may be three reasons why it is not popular. I don't know if I am right. Please forgive me if I am wrong. First: the title of your book is too long, and there are many novels starting with Gu Panshengzi. It is difficult for others to search for your title. Novel Second: In terms of content, in the first chapter of yours, the English words appear very awkwardly. I originally read it very smoothly, but after a word came out, I would get stuck for a moment, and then continue reading, and then I encountered it again, and got stuck again. It was a difficult experience. Yes, it is really recommended not to add unnecessary English words, which may affect the reading experience. Third: Too many new characters appear too quickly. In the first few chapters of a book, it is a routine operation to directly introduce several important characters in it, but this needs to be fleshed out, otherwise it will be difficult for readers to remember the name of a character without personality characteristics. However, your first few chapters did not make these characters three-dimensional, and these names are not very distinctive names, so it will be difficult to remember them. So much for the temporary shortcomings. In terms of plot and writing, just judging from the few chapters I have read, it is quite good. The content is very vivid, the writing is also very delicate, and the dialogue transitions are very natural. It is very good. That's it for now. I will continue to comment after I read some more content. I hope the author will not be angry, haha😄