It's Not Easy to Be a Half-Immortal

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"Taoyuan Suppression of Bandits" The soldier passed by to study and stayed behind👣

"Taoyuan Suppression of Bandits" The soldier passed by to study and stayed behind👣

Come on come on! Constant support!

Come on come on! Constant support!

Come from the creative circle. Personally, I think that the greatest success is to finish it without ending. Mutual encouragement!

We have been interacting with each other all the time. The book is really good and the author is also very good. Make a call

The book is very good, but I don't think it will be popular The book is very good, whether it is creativity, jokes, buttons or the advancement of the plot. It is not rushed or slow, and it has a potential that can be called good. It has a rare aura and fairy spirit. However, the author seems not to handle the details properly, and some character designs cannot be fully expressed. , Some of the poisonous points in the plot are relatively blunt, and the content presentation processing also seems to be inexperienced. The technique is good but the writing is not very good. It is difficult to get ahead in fantasy, a large category where gods gather, especially in the current situation of fantasy in the online literature world, which is from its heyday to decline. It will be better if you invest in Xianxia Come on in the future.

After reading three chapters, the plot design of the article is very good and the beginning is very novel. The climax of the plot after reincarnation is not obvious, and it could use some more writing to smooth it out. Also, it may be that your usual speaking habits are different from mine. If you look at the placement of the adverbial adjective in the sentence differently, it may not read smoothly. It may also be my problem. Big cheers for the author!

Good night (☝｀˘ω˘)☝

Good night (☝｀˘ω˘)☝

Good evening! Let's work hard together!