How Lonely Is the Invincibility of Titled Douluo?

Well, how should I put it, it felt pretty good at first, but I won't say anything about your protagonist's first sword of 96 or something. In time travel, it's normal to open a plug-in and everything else. But from your protagonist into the small village. You brought someone's mother back to life, but you didn't give her a role. From the following content, I can see that you have not changed much from the original work. But you have changed the beginning, why don't you keep it the same? For example, let San and his mother meet. The next step is the plot where Xiao Wu becomes the boss. I feel like you just completely copied the original plot. Other than a slight change and the addition of an additional protagonist, there isn't much. Oh, and one person's scene was also deleted. The next step is to enter the village. The fighting scenes feel similar to the original ones. They are probably copied or only slightly changed. But that's normal, you probably can't write about how exciting the fight is. The next big forest has been slightly modified, but I feel that the process has not changed much. Just one person was added, and the rest was copied. Also let me ask. Where did you put the Soul Arena scene? I didn't read the rest because I felt that the writing style of the book was a little childish. It should be enough for practicing, but if you want to put it on the shelves, the content is not exciting enough, and the previous ones are not attractive enough. In addition, I will give you a personal suggestion. You either focus on the protagonist or the original work. Don't you think it's a little weird for two people to jump around and still have to penetrate one of them?

Can the author do this? Take the Namikaze Minato. Get it up.

Author, you can't do this.

Who is the heroine? Can Bibi Dong do it? After all, I can't change it. I like other people's wives' personalities.

There are really few brainless cool articles like this nowadays. I have been looking for a book like this for several hours. It is really comfortable to read.

Update speed, you are a bit slow.

Oh, I'm dead, I was poisoned. .

The writing is okay, but there are too many typos.

This type of invincible writing is no longer popular these days, brother and I'm almost going to die from poison after reading it.

The author please bring Bibi Dong and Gu Yuena into the harem, please

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Now the author is scrambling to be a eunuch

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