Bodyguard Daughter

The writing is beautiful and the paragraphs are concise, but the idea is not novel enough and is very bland. I hope you can use more imagination. There are no other problems. I would like to send you two votes to support it.

Tonight I will rewrite the book "The Bodyguard's Daughter". I hope readers like it, thank you for your support 😊

During the recent holiday, the novel will be suspended for 4 days. Thank you readers for your support.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

There is a bit too much dialogue, but it doesn't hurt in terms of romance. The main reason is that the description in the novel is a bit less than the dialogue. The actions are quite good. It is the environment and atmosphere that needs to be paid attention to and interspersed with the dialogue, so that the dialogue and description appear to be balanced. By the way, this article looks quite girly, and then I saw the young lady doing roundhouse kicks and over-the-shoulder throws, etc., And I felt that the style of the painting was a bit inconsistent 2333, keep up the good work~

The writing is good, I have saved it, keep it up! Welcome to visit us again!

After reading a few chapters, the cover is a highlight! The title of the novel is also okay, the writing is pretty good, the story is fascinating, and the writing is excellent. I like it very much. The outline could be a little more detailed. All in all, this is a very good novel. I hope you will continue to update it. Come on. I wish you can become a god soon and realize your dreams.

I like it so much. Please continue to update, I will support it to the end. Come on, Oli! (U‿ฺu✿ฺ)

Wenwen has been collected and written well. I am waiting for the update. Also, are you interested in getting to know the author😋

I have collected the book. The title is very attractive. It makes people think about a lot of things at once. Great work.

Great, but I have no votes today. I have to remember to vote for you tomorrow.

It's well written and worth reading.

Dear author, please update and add more. It's too little. . 😔

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The writing is good, the story is conflicting and exciting, please give it a try

Unless a master has traffic, it is difficult for such a mediocre start to win the favor of editors. I have seen many writers who were very happy at the beginning, but later they insisted and became editors. For newcomers who cannot capture the hearts of readers, I feel sorry for myself. In the end, they end up in exile like me, amusing themselves among the scattered people, watching with cold eyes, just a little bit.

How should I put it? I saw the latest chapter, and I don't know how to evaluate it. I feel that the content is too little, the length, the plot, etc. Have not been developed yet. The author's writing style is good, and the description of the dialogue is also very exciting and in place 👍👍 👍 The title and cover of the book are also very attractive, and as for the characters, it is very good to be able to reflect their respective personalities and images in a very short content 👍👍👍 But what? Speaking of which, the opening felt too mediocre and not very attractive. It was not very novel and the description of the heroine's movements such as turning around and kicking seemed to ruin the character (it just felt like the painting style had suddenly changed. I thought she was a cold goddess) (maybe it was for the sake of the plot) Love [[Revenge] needs it, but it feels a bit abrupt to me anyway) I suggest you draw more scenes that match the character settings for support; well, if the atmosphere you depict is more delicate, and you open up more imagination, it will feel better if you feel it. (The above is for reference only. I haven't read many modern urban romance books, so I hope Haihan 🙏😃) In short, the writing style is on the upper side, and the paragraphs are well handled, but it is too mediocre. I need to come up with some ideas. The book is worth looking forward to, come on! ✊✊✊

The writing is very good and the subject matter is very novel. I look forward to the update~