Mortals in the Heavens Begin to Cultivate Immortality

Come on, author, the writing is very good. ​In my opinion, after so many years of being a mortal. Your opening is also one of the best. The foundation of this mortal world has been laid, and I have reached a high level of Qi training in a few years. I am in the foundation building stage of absorbing the evil energy of the Black Evil Sect according to what you wrote. Then no matter which world you are in, your life-saving ability will be greatly improved. As for those that are criticized as soon as they come out and are said to be inconsistent with the original works of ordinary people, the author can ignore them. It can be deleted directly. Those who can only represent themselves will definitely not represent the majority of book fans. At least someone like me who likes the legends of mortals cultivating immortals is very willing to see creative and sincere works. It's not a parallel import like the Immortal World chapter, which even ordinary fans can't stand.

You can open your mind to things that are not written in the original work, but don't change things that are clearly written in the original work, otherwise the original work will piss you off.

It feels like the author is rubbing the reader's intelligence to the ground...

It's not bad, but I didn't explain the calligraphy skills and you will be able to do it once you practice it. You said it would be better if you add a little bit of this. . No sense of leverage. .

Why didn't you grab the small bottle?

Yes, it's good that there are still mortals now, it's good.

It's best to have memory fragments appear when you read the book, otherwise it would be a bit awkward to read the words directly.

It was so well written that I couldn't put it down!

Come on＾0＾~,,, mortals can write longer ones⊙∀⊙!

Author, I support you with four monthly tickets every day. I hope your work will not be too eunuch! In fact, the writing is quite good. Although there are some shortcomings, it is much better than some cool articles and stupid articles.

When writing about mortals, the protagonist feels particularly defeated if he doesn't snatch his "little bottle". His achievements are in the future. Opportunities are in front of him, and he is afraid of the highest achievements of those who have the opportunity. What other worlds does your protagonist travel through? What's the use of knowing the development trajectory of the original world! You just go and hug his thigh tightly, follow his steps, and in the end pray that he will share resources with you and become an immortal and an ancestor together. I personally think that since you can travel through the world you don't know, what's the point of not changing it or subverting it? Think about it, "You are the one who can send blades to Mr. Wangyu or put a sack on his head." Han Paopao, Han Tianzun, can he, does he dare, does he have a chance. "You have this opportunity, and you can do it, but in front of the law, you can only think about it."

I watched the beginning and it feels good, keep up the good work

In the original work, there are very few spiritual weapons, and only a few appear. When you do this, how do you write about the characters in the original work? Could it be that you changed the top-notch magic weapon written in the original work into a spiritual weapon yourself. And you said that in the foundation building stage, spiritual weapons are basically used. In the original work, the best magical weapons are basically used. Those who have spiritual weapons are those who have Yuan Ying or a very powerful backer. When writing about Zhutian, I have to clarify the basic settings of the original work. You can add your own. For example, the qi training in this world is different from that in other worlds, but the names are the same.

Does the author have to cultivate to the realm of flying corpses in the mortal world before going back once?

Traveling through the world of mortals cultivating immortals would be a complete journey without a small bottle.

The writing is good, but I personally feel that the main character is a bit out of focus. Training as a zombie is a last resort. The protagonist will have to go back sooner or later. Shouldn't he make more preparations for his return? Going through life and death again and again, it would be a tragedy if one accidentally dies and returns to reality without even a usable practice technique.

Ten Brothers, The Legend of the Dragon and the Dragon, Journey to the East, The Legend of the Gods, The Legend of Jigong, The Legend of the White Snake, The Legend of the Fish and the Beauty of Heaven and Earth, The Brilliant Spring, Pig Bajie, The Cowherd and the Weaver Girl, Celestial Master Zhong Kui, Pawn Shop No. 8, The One Who Conquers Demons. Snowflake Goddess Dragon, Demon Realm Dragon Ball, Water Moon Cave Heaven, Eight Formations of Gods and Ghosts, Demon Sword Chess of Life and Death, these are basically written by no one, and many others are poorly written, especially Xiaoao, Yitian, and Shendiao. I don't want to read them when I see them.