Pingkangfang

First, I went to the circle and read other people's book reviews. Indeed, the beginning seems a bit bland. But did they continue reading? If you read slowly along the rhythm of this book, it is not difficult to find that each chapter of the author is a short story, which can even be told independently. Not all conflicts that arise require death and bad guys, and not all of them are unforgettable. Complementing each other is the attitude that ancient works should have. Let's talk about language. So many people are praising it, so I won't go into details. There are some traces of vernacular writing in the late Qing Dynasty. I think the author must have read a lot of related books. After all, writing skills cannot be developed overnight. Finally, let's talk objectively. This book by the author can be regarded as a niche writing method among popular themes. There are not many deliberate frivolous descriptions, nor does it seek to open up the plot. It's more like she's telling stories than writing them. He objectively presents a living character in front of readers without adding any emotion to the character. This is why some people say that her writing may be emotionless. The author should also pay special attention to this. Your current writing style is too calm, but there are still some details that require you to boldly let go and write as you like. 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

I don't read many women's books, and Hua Da is one of the few books that I can read. Nowadays, there are too many articles that focus on the golden three chapters, which can indeed attract people's attention and are fun to watch. It is true. But these three golden chapters will inevitably establish the writing style, which may be fast-paced or produce some undesirable poisonous points. It's a big book, and the first three chapters are eloquently written. The ambush writing is very particular, and it's naturally not stiff. I prefer this kind of opening, as if I am reading the beginning of traditional literature. Come on, don't care about what others say, just be yourself.

The writing style is light and there is no overly refined rhetoric to deliberately exaggerate it, but it allows the story to progress layer by layer, the characters vividly appear on the page, and the various entanglements between the city and the palace are laid out. This is my favorite ancient saying!

I've been thinking about it for a long time, so I'm going to write it down seriously today. First of all, give me a compliment as usual. One, the author's writing style is very good, and the rhetoric is rich but not redundant. Two, the plot advances well, the suspense at the beginning is superimposed, and the whole story is full of pitfalls, but later on it is obvious that the author is solving these problems, which must be the main part of the story. Three, the characters are very vividly portrayed. Mr. Jiu is gloomy and full of worries; Yun Niang is virtuous and pleasant; Nian'er is smart and naughty; Changxing is quiet and calm... Furthermore, it is not a good place to talk about personal impressions. One is the role of the protagonist in the opening chapter. I saw some book friends brought it up, so I won't go into details here. In general, the role of the protagonist Gu Changxing in the opening chapter seems very limited, and the description is not rich enough (maybe it is just for the suspense setting, but when I read it, I always felt that I couldn't tell who is the protagonist and who is the supporting role.) Two, there are too many characters in the first three chapters, and the perspective change is a bit confusing. For example, in the first chapter, Gu Changxing was sent to Mr. Jiu by the housekeeper. After a while, Yun Niang came, and after a while an old woman came, and after a while Nian'er came, and then the boy came, and then Mr. Jiu showed his true face. In fact, the appearance of some characters in this is very unnecessary, such as the old woman outside the door. Her role is nothing more than to explain why Yun Niang is crying, and the rest is very... (Btw, the grandma in Nian'er's mouth should be this old woman Well, I was really dizzy when I read it) Generally speaking, the questions I raised are very small. It seems that there is no need to correct them now? Just think of it as a reminder to the author, and he should pay more attention when writing articles in the future. Come on and update (ง •̀_•́)ง, keep it in your permanent collection😄

From the circle. The writing style is great, antique, charming but not redundant. The story is told eloquently but without delay, and continues to develop in an orderly manner! What a wonderful girl Jiu'er is, and Lu Qing! They must 🔒! ! ! ! ! Come on! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I didn't pay much attention to the topic before reading it, until there was a topic called "Zhenxia Qiyuan", which stumped me hahaha, and then I asked Du Niang. After checking the meaning of the idiom, come back and read the article. What the title says is what the text records! It's so big and detailed, half of the questions are idioms, four short words with profound meanings! His literary skills are evident.

Da Dada has very profound writing skills, and the characterization is very detailed and vivid. It may seem plain at the beginning but is extremely engaging. It is a very good work and has been collected.

This is the first female novel I've ever read, and I feel pretty good about it. I've read thousands of books in all genres, but in the end it was the bland and cheerful light novels that attracted me, from reading ten lines at a time to word by word now. Plain books have more feeling. This book also happens to be a bland one, so I could read it.

The large writing style really makes my eyes light up. In fact, I like this kind of slow, light and profound writing style. It is very powerful. This is a writing style that requires a strong foundation to master. I hope it will get better and better.

The writing is delicate and full of ancient style, and it stirs up a small wave of love... When I read the first chapter, although there was no ups and downs in the plot, I was attracted by the pure ancient style. At the last moment, the strange chest pain attracted me deeply. I read the second chapter, and then the third chapter... Happy, happy! Look up at the bright moon and drink wine to the sky. What a great book!

I like this style of writing very much, it can make people calm down and pray for more 😭

The writing is very good. It was very confusing at the beginning. It's very readable. Come on.

I like the plain and calm style of writing. It feels like a dream of Red Mansions.

I like this writing style, it is natural, clean, and the suspense is drawn out very logically, making people want to continue reading. Collect decisively

Excellent work! ! The writing, plot progression, and characterization are all top-notch. I hope to maintain a consistent writing style. It will definitely be a good book if the plot does not break down later Continue to update! !

The plot is good, the writing is natural and smooth, and the plot progression is good. Looking forward to the follow-up⊙ω⊙

Not bad, not bad. I can tell you that this book is bound to be popular. From a language perspective, it is very interesting and humorous. I quite like it

I like Lu Qing so much! After reading more than twenty chapters, I finally started to understand Lu Qing deeply. There is not much description of the characters, and it can even be said that the images of the characters gradually emerge as the plot develops. Even now, I still have a vague impression of them in my mind. The writing style is unintentional, and the bridge flows like water. There is enough white space for readers to imagine their favorite characters. I discovered this little thought~

It's antique and charming, and the title is all four words. It's great. Come on 🌹

I have read more than ten chapters and have collected them. I don't read many romance novels, but this book attracted me. Just a little suggestion, it should be regarded as nonsense. ... The author is very skilled in describing actions, expressions, and plot development. You can put more emphasis on psychological description and make the protagonist more prominent, so that readers can quickly fall in love with the protagonist.

Very touching ancient sayings, the writing style is light, come on, I'm optimistic about you

1. The introduction is the only one among the hundreds of books I have reviewed that is short, profound and straightforward. 2. The writing style is full of charm, and one word has a lingering aftertaste, which is indifferent, elegant, and tranquil. I watched a few episodes when I knew it was airing. This book gave me a similar feeling to that one. They were both beautiful. I especially loved the sentences in this book. Many words and sentences reflected the great writing style. Coke. 3. Character descriptions have a "soul". Your pen gives the characters in the article soul. Generally speaking, the vivid images are very contagious. 4. Some paragraphs are too long. 5. Oh, there is another one, the topic is clear, Pingkangfang, simple but contains profound meaning... Let's encourage each other.

I just drank some wine and am a little dizzy, but your book is really good to read. The writing is good, and the subtle plots are well narrated. I really admired it. The comparison made me realize a lot of my shortcomings, thank you 🙏! I will continue to pay attention!

The narration is clear and the relationship between the characters is not confusing. Some places have a bit of a abrupt twist. For example, when the male and female protagonists first meet, the female protagonist ignores him, but later finds out that his adopted brother is involved and immediately helps him. Then the male protagonist still feels warm? ? There is no problem with the logic, but the signs of 'writing' are too obvious and unnatural

There is nothing to say about the writing style. At first glance, it doesn't look like a noob. The plot is very smooth, and the details of the segments are well handled. The character's personality traits are well controlled. It's worth seeing, come on

A few simple dialogues and expressions can make a character stand out. It is so well written in large letters. I have a little suggestion. In my humble opinion, would it be more exciting to add some descriptions of inner conflicts? All in all, it's very beautiful and I look forward to the follow-up.

The writing style is antique and has a different flavor! It is of higher quality than many online novels ~ I support it greatly

The writing style is quite good, it has an ancient charm, and there are a lot of words in one chapter. I don't think there are any shortcomings in the content and plot. It's just that I was a little confused at the beginning. Maybe it was because the reviews said that there were too many people in the show at the beginning, and I couldn't tell the priority. But after reading more, you will understand. It's great. Come on.

I have also read some female videos that are close to life. There are fewer of them that simply narrate stories, and they are all spreading dog food under the banner of fantasy and romance. Of course it is not bad, but compared to this, I prefer the various situations in the world written by the author. Come on, support!

Well, I read it specifically before commenting. I rarely read this kind of purely ancient novels. It's not that I don't appreciate them, but the stories in these novels are very long. The author's writing style is really delicate, and the writing style and rhyme of the novel are even better than those of some ancient masters. The only shortcoming is probably that he is a novice after all, and the characterization and use of some sentences are slightly insufficient, but this is inevitable. As long as you persist in finishing one or two books, it will definitely get better and better. I have this problem myself. The novel is too short, I look forward to the follow-up! Will continue to pay attention!