Qishi Tianmang

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Come on, the author is very thoughtful and the content is not boring. It combines the ethereal inspiration of the novel with the character's monologue, and it is flesh-and-blood. I think it is worth recommending. Our recommendation is his motivation!

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There's no point in talking, but you'll get angry.

——Yes, I've collected it and kept it in my fingers so I can read it when I get fatter. ——After taking a quick look, it seems that most of us have committed a common mistake among newcomers. ——The paragraph is too long. ——Nowadays, everyone uses mobile phones to read, and they can read ten lines at a time. If your paragraph is too long, it will make people very tired to read, and it will very discourage readers. It is recommended to greatly subdivide the paragraphs, and try to make it one sentence per sentence, and the sentence will be multiple paragraphs long. —— A narrative section is divided into sections like this. ——Although my paragraphs may not be divided very well, they are also modified by others, so you can refer to them. ——The writing style is very good, and it can be seen from the wording that Da Da has a profound literary background. However, there is a small suggestion, don't write words that are too advanced and difficult to understand. The level of readers varies. If you write difficult vocabulary, it will be difficult for some people to get this point, and they will not be able to imagine the scene. ——Well, that's probably it. It's just my humble opinion. Everything is based on the big picture. Come on.

The writing style is good, and he is knowledgeable, which is different from ordinary code words.

Come on, I write very well, just sit back and wait to gain weight.

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The literary talent is extraordinary, the writing is really good, I learned a lot.

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I was not online yesterday due to something, so I forgot to vote 😥

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Come on, come on, I believe tomorrow will be better

The author makes great efforts to update👍

I really think it's well written. It's a pity that this kind of writing that is a little bit literal, or a little bit grounded, is very unpleasant now.

The writing of this book is smooth, the story is tightly connected, and the characters are vivid and vivid. It is an excellent work. Please pay attention and collect it decisively! ps: I have written a humble book, and I hope you will learn from each other and comment on it. Thank you for all the words I have to say!

Accept it, thank you, author, for making progress together!

How come so few people read such a good book?

Suddenly I understood why there was nothing wrong with reading this book. I am used to reading Jin Yong's books 😎

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I don't understand, uh, I don't know how to evaluate it.

This author is very knowledgeable. He is proficient in English. It will still be useful to study as a graduate student for a few more years.

You can't make much money by writing a book. Doesn't the author have a main job?