Lost Dream Overlap

It's very well written, about dreams in life, and the subconscious foreshadowing of youth's dreams. One-to-one correspondence and amplification make people think deeply and introspect. With support, come on 🙂. Collect and follow 😁

I'm late to invest, I'm the eleventh one (vomiting blood Finally found a book that may be popular in the future

It is recommended to give some copies of those monsters so that readers can understand where those monsters came from and what their identities are? What are abilities? Make readers think that those monsters are real living beings, rather than just a tool to increase the horror atmosphere.

It has been changed to contract status. Collections and rewards are welcome 🤭 (you can ignore this sentence)

Today, a big boss supported me, and I feel honored. At the same time, his works also gave me a lot of feelings, making me willing to re-examine my own works. This is my first book. I admit that the pace of this book is not stable enough and the plot is particularly slow. I am now writing my second book. I have learned lessons from the first book and slowly improved the flaws in my writing. I believe that every book before becoming a god is a special kind of training. No matter whether I can achieve something in the future, I am really grateful to the readers who are still willing to read my books even when my novels are not good enough! 🙂

I hope that I can write more words in each picture, either to describe their expressions and movements, or to focus on their psychological description. In this case, I think I can let readers understand their inner fears more clearly.

Great imagination! I admire it and collected it, keep going! Keep updating and welcome to visit again!

The manuscript of this book has been completed, so there is no need to worry about interruption. This is a debut novel, so if readers have any plot suggestions, please don't discuss it with me for the time being (because the manuscript has been saved and no major changes are possible.) Thank you!

Today the wind is warm and the sun is warm. Please update me daily. (-_-.)

Trumpet Festival, give you tickets, come on😊

Come on, I suggest you give the heroine more training and focus on portraying the heroine's psychological description and psychological changes. Otherwise, in the later stages, the situation will become more and more terrifying and dangerous, and it will be unreasonable for the heroine to remain calm.

The description is very immersive. Come on ＾0＾~

Collected it, the description is very good, it feels like being there, I will read it again after finishing the exam 😜😜

Looking at my novel again, I found that it is still not mature enough. Because I have studied pure science and engineering for so many years, I always wanted to incorporate more science fiction elements into it, but I did not expect that such reasoning and forced science fiction would make the rhythm of the novel very confusing. Moreover, I don't understand the traditional way of writing online literature, so I just follow my own ideas, which probably dissuades a lot of readers (sorry). Anyway, I would like to thank my few readers. All I can say is, look forward to my growth. I will spend one to two years carefully crafting the next book, and finally present a satisfactory work.

The ideas are good and the writing is also very exciting. I will continue to follow it, 😀

I like this kind of subject matter very much, so I will keep reading it and I will comment after reading it 🌹🌹

Nice new book! Keep up the good work!