I Have Been a Veteran in Various Dynasties

The writing is quite good, come on, the author

The writing is quite good, but why is there no "" in the first two chapters? . Looks weird

. . . . It's too short, it takes ten minutes to invest, and it's not enough even after reading it Be sure to add "", otherwise it will look strange.

The story has a good start and the description is very vivid. If the details are enriched, it will be a good article. Come on

The dialogue text should be enclosed in quotation marks, "like this." A period should be added after a paragraph. Speaking does not mean saying, saying: "Hello!" Speaking, asking, answering, etc.