My System Is Too Rampant

I admire you brother for writing so many words and getting so many recommendation votes. That's awesome.

Reading the words written by the author is like a 0.3Mm syringe pen or a small but sharp scalpel. No matter how common the emotion is, it can be described to you with every detail, ups and downs.

I just read three or four chapters, and I feel that the writing is a bit off-kilter, not very stable and a bit impetuous. I am just sharing my feelings. I am not trying to discredit the author, but it just feels a bit unnatural.

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No, you have become a demon. A demon is the king of time. Going against the flow of time is just like playing. Isn't it enough to go against the flow of one person's time? Besides, if you make such a big move against Dikui, the world must be in chaos? There are so many people at the wedding. Can't you see it if you are blind?

After reading Chapter 20, I wrote about how much I loved Guo Cailing at the beginning, but then immediately broke up after a disagreement, went to a bar, and didn't answer the phone. Empathy Liang'er, this feeling is really. . . The key is that the two people in the end knew each other, and they had only met twice. And the male protagonist actually touched Liang'er there! ! ! Which protagonist is said to be the most righteous? You hit the wrong person (Sun Qian), didn't apologize and just ran away to avoid responsibility? If you can't beat the boss, why don't you just give it up just to steal the marriage? The connection is that he still knows that if he can't defeat him, the world will be destroyed.

Deng Huojiang~ Will there be a female protagonist in this book? (:[___]←Waiting for reply