Swallowing the Starry Sky: Zhao Dongli

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I saw that it was a good idea to recruit Xu Xin. It should not be like the original work, where the heroine is simply taken away in one stroke or piled up with resources. In the reincarnation era, Xu Xin is still the immortal Luo Feng, the eternal true god of Yongdu. It is too outrageous. It seems happy and contented, but in fact the gap between strength and realm is so big that there is no topic at all. You actually wrote that the heroine Xu Xin should progress together with the protagonist, not to mention a reincarnation era, but at least three reincarnation eras to reach the point where the True God of the Void can reincarnate and return to the continent of origin. Otherwise, I will feel sorry for my other half. You don't need me to teach you how to write, you should be able to write too. Don't appear to be the peak of a happy and happy life, otherwise you will just be a tool for having children. The gap in strength is too big, and there is really no common topic. The strength of the heroine Xu Xin is too out of touch with the protagonist. I am the first to disagree, otherwise I would be sorry to write a fan fiction. Besides, in the original work Swallowing the Stars, the people on Earth themselves have extremely high levels of understanding. What is missing is opportunity and the path of your own choice. The original work only briefly mentions Luo Feng as the protagonist and not the female protagonist, so I really think that Xu Xin is not good. Comprehension is the foundation. Hong and Thor seem to me to be weak in the original novel.

Collect first and then talk. Many Devouring colleagues have cut it, I hope it will be updated properly and no eunuchs will be needed.

I keep following the original plot and it's not interesting at all. It was quite refreshing when I first started watching it. But the more I read, the more I can't stand it anymore.

If you really plan to follow Luo Feng's path, can't you be a little innovative?

The protagonist's sense of system presence is too poor. He just completes tasks and does not give rewards. In other words, the author is too lazy to write what the rewards are, just to follow Luo Feng's plot.

If you don't have anything of your own, you might as well read the original work once. The protagonist is not interesting either

It's not easy to see this excellent fanfic. Good luck, author~ Also: Since the protagonist has taken a series of measures, don't let anyone discover the secrets of the earth before the protagonist rises.

This book is inevitable, the setting is a failure

Poisoned! Every system is poison!

Is he just Luo Feng's counterpart from the parallel universe? It feels very unpleasant. If you follow Luo Feng's path, it won't change even if you change lanes. The heroine also stipulates that when Luo Feng is unlucky, should the protagonist have to do it himself? It's so disgusting. It's better to read the original work. Is the author here to buy feelings?

I hope the protagonist's second avatar won't be a demon slayer, as it will be basically useless later

Why is it necessary to seize the body and swallow the beast? With such an incredible system, I feel that the swallowing beast is a bit redundant.

I feel like the setting of this book is very good and easy to control.

The best Devouring fanfic I have ever seen

Author, Xu Xin should not commit suicide like in the original work, but should improve Xu Xin and her sister's cultivation level and strength, especially their potential (if there is a system, are you afraid?), Let them at least be able to cultivate themselves to immortality. Of course, the higher the cultivation level, the better (the Lord is not a dream, the Lord of the Universe can also achieve it 😁)

If Hong rises early, he must be allowed to conceal the strength of the Illusion Realm Sea and just break through more than a dozen levels. As long as he does not attract the attention of the giant axe, there will be no problem. Except for Hong, no one can discover the secret of the earth. They only think that with some other opportunities, the earth can be saved.

Is this book a dead giveaway again?

It's been several days, but don't let it get cold

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

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Burn incense, play the erhu, and a desolate song echoes on the grave

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I'm not the author, can you please update it quickly?

Doesn't this mean Luo Feng is replaced by Zhao Dongli? It's just a name change. It's worse than shit.

Brothers in the book world can go and read the book Xingwu Daera. It is also about the same theme, not a fanfiction, and has no system. The devouring taste is very pure.