Fantasy Tang Dynasty

It's fun to write in big letters, keep up the good work!

I have a lot of ideas, I hope I can keep updating daily, come on

The writing is good, the plot is exciting, and the rhythm is well controlled. Come on! Already collected, read slowly

Nice writing, keep up the good work!

When reading fantasy, it actually feels like a historical novel! Great work, already collected~

After reading this book carefully, I feel that there are a few areas that are lacking. Don't mind if I mention it, you can just delete this review. First, there are many errors in punctuation. The second is the rhythm, which is not accurate. The most important thing is that the sense of immersion is poor, and there is almost no description of details. With good works, others can be immersed in them once, and the main reason is to write the details that readers most want to see vividly. Your articles are usually about who said who, actions plus words, and too few details.

Readers who have seen it and find it interesting can help spread the book.

Very nice, saved it! Stick with it and keep updating steadily! Come on! Welcome to visit us again!

Why is there no text that says Mo Shiyu?

One chapter a day is a bit short. Can you add more chapters?

I have collected it. The story is very interesting and the author has good ideas. I have now read the third chapter. My personal suggestion is that it would be better if some of the details were more substantial. Overall good, keep going! "Mechanical Swordsman" remains.

Come on, it has been recycled, the writing is great!

Read two chapters carefully. First, you need to pay more attention to punctuation. The second paragraph is too long. I haven't discovered the others yet. I will give you a long review after reading it.

One chapter is basically a dialogue, with a lot of common sense questions. If the author doesn't change the basics, there is no hope of signing the contract. Forgive me for my venomous tongue.

I have collected it, and you have added a collection. Don't underestimate this collection. This is a transition from 0 to 1. This is the first collection that leads to success. Please reply.