Star Roqib

The game will start with the update tomorrow, and it will be six chapters in a row. Please give me some pointers to see if there is a visual or immediate feeling. Thank you!

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Even though the Milky Way may be small, the power inside it is so powerful! 😜

Because a brother suggested that there be no background introduction, I adjusted it and added a background to the first chapter. Brothers and sisters who have already read it must go back to the first chapter to take a look. This preface is very important, very important, very important! Say important things three times!

I was a little disappointed because I didn't pass the review, so I sent everything I had on hand! Maybe there was too much time spent on shaping the personalities of each character, and it was not interesting at all. Let's continue writing another part!

After filling up a red envelope of 100 yuan, I just wanted a few more people to take a look and give their opinions, whether I should write it down or continue farming!

Don't think about success or failure, just write silently according to your own ideas. I just wanted to write a story that I might be able to read to my own children in the future. Of course I also hope that a small number of brothers and sisters will like it!

If there are any typos or inappropriate words, please feel free to point them out! After I post it, I will read it and revise it myself, but sometimes I am too busy to read it. Thank you everyone!

Reason for adjustment: 1. Some people reported that after reading a few chapters, they found nothing interesting. 2. I haven't passed the 100,000 yuan contract, probably for this reason. I want to apply again. Adjustment method: Remove the too long background introduction at the front and move to the middle to slowly penetrate The adjustment will not affect friends who have read it before. Thank you for your support.

The line between detail and wordiness is sometimes not so clear. Not enough detail is boring, and too much detail is off-putting. Therefore, in the first few dozen chapters, in order to avoid being verbose, I wrote less details, especially psychological details. I don't know if it's boring or not, I hope someone brings it up. The latter ones, probably after chapter 80, are richer in details. Thanks again to the friends who recommend me every day, thank you, you are the only motivation for me to keep writing!

I just read it. It is written very fluently and is not boring to read. I have read less of this type, so I can't give you too many opinions. But after reading the first two pages, I found that you are definitely a slow-burner. You need to read carefully and deepen to understand a lot of new things. It's difficult for newcomers. Come on.

Didn't the previous fights feel a bit uninviting? Because I am considering letting him fight with his mind, but there will be a series of fights around Chapter 90. I want him to open up and burn a little, but of course he will not be completely brainless. Stay tuned! ! !

My work management rights have been banned. I wonder if the ban will be lifted today! !

Starting from today, I will make a major update of 3,000 words. If I have time, I will make two updates, and if I have less time, I will make one update. Try to keep updating as much as possible!

Thanks to Life Like a Play and She Like a Dream for their constant support, and also to other friends, thank you for your recommendation votes.

Say whatever you want, but don't criticize me. I just read two books that were rewarded with millions of dollars, and I really can't stand them. With over 100,000 words and hundreds of thousands of recommendation votes, I can only hehe∽ It's not envy, it's not jealousy, it's not that superficial. There are two books by other new authors on my bookshelf. They are much better than the one above that had hundreds of thousands of recommendations, but only had a few hundred recommendations. Is this what Qidian is doing now?

Thank you that life is like a play and she is like a dream, thank you for your leisure time in Tianyuan, and thank you to all the brothers and sisters for your support. Apply for another review in two days. Even if it fails, I will continue to update it as long as I have your support! Grateful!

It's really well written, keep it up 😊

I just randomly wrote the title of the book at that time and wanted to change it.

Three chapters were merged previously, but the content remains unchanged!

It's pretty good, nothing bad, the recommendation vote has been voted for

Dear friends, I failed to review it twice. I thought about it a lot in one night. The main reason is that I couldn't control it when I wrote it the first time. It made readers less excited and less happy after reading it. It happened that the management rights were banned, which is also a good thing. I re-conceived the book and re-wrote it. The tentative title is "Galaxy Awakening". I hope that the second time I tell this story, it will be more exciting. Thank you for the support of several friends. Although there are still dozens of chapters saved, the long-term pain is not as short-term as the short-term pain. Thanks again to my friends for their support! ! !