Dou Po: Plot Crusher

How can I put it, I felt something was wrong later on, maybe I was too anxious to develop the plot and it took a sharp turn, a bit too much. The first 25 chapters were very good, but after the coming-of-age ceremony, I felt a little lost. I hope the author can calm down and write slowly without being too anxious.

In fact, from another angle, Tang San wasn't a good person either. At the beginning of Dou Yiyi, the martial arts and skills were in the hands of the big family, and the common people had no chance to awaken. The Wuhun Palace gives ordinary people the opportunity to awaken. In trying to break the solidified classes, it is beneficial to society no matter how you look at it. Qian Xunji's stuff is just a blank slate. As for Tang San, a man with a fixed mindset in feudal society came over. Trying to bring back the system that is moving towards socialism, because he only thinks that is good. At the same time, some of the decisions made by Wuhun Point happen to conflict with the protagonist. The most obvious one is to kill Xiaowu. Would a normal person not kill a weak hundred thousand year soul beast when they see it? Oh, just because you have been with him for a long time and have feelings for him, do you believe that spirit beasts and humans can coexist peacefully? Are you uncomfortable killing him? Who cares about you? Soul beasts and humans are on opposite sides. Let's talk about Dou Er, asking Qinggu to use his power privately. In the finale, he grabbed the child and threatened his mother, which was absolutely amazing. He forcibly added the soul beast luck of the auspicious beast to his daughter, and said that the auspicious beast was originally one with Tang Wutong. Think about it, Rui Shou has been around for more than 10,000 years, and Dou Er's background is 10,000 years after Dou Yi. He and your daughter were one and the same, and they were born earlier than you. No one really believes what he says, no, no. Tang San's relatively bright and righteous persona collapsed in Dou Er. In Dou Yi, his power was just not that great and did not show it. They are all common faults of the protagonist, double standards. If your own camp does something fucked up, then he must have his own reasons for it. Can't you understand? I don't understand, okay. Our positions are at odds with each other, so you should wait to die. If the other camp does something that causes the protagonist to lose profits, no matter whether it is right or wrong, you are finished.

Well written, some garbage novels, I really don't understand if the author has to be born in the Xiao family, or has to lick Xiao Yan, and be reborn in the Gu family or Yunlan Sect. Isn't it okay? He insists on being born in the Xiao family, and the Xiao family is so garbage that at any time a stronger family or sect can wipe out the family. Add in the garbage of Xiao Yan, if not The protagonist's halo is dead long ago. Xiao Yan's trash is doing what a strongman does under the protagonist's halo, robbing strange fires, stealing strange fire fragments, robbing the body of the Sky Demon Phoenix, and killing people at every turn. Moreover, Xiao Yan's trash is still a narrow-minded person. Nalan Yanran comes to break the engagement. That beast really takes himself seriously. Does he have the qualifications to divorce his wife? Trash really takes himself seriously. If I were Nalan Yanran, I would just wipe out the entire Xiao family and Trash. Xiao Yan, that trash, really takes himself seriously. As long as it is about stepping on Xiao Yan and making an appointment with the Xiao family, the novel is a good novel, so Xiao Yan, that trash, must die. I repeat Xiao Yan must die 10,000 times. Take my words

Everyone, should I play a single heroine or a harem? Or should we just imitate the old thief Chen and create a heroine-less one? 😁

Alas, it's this kind of garbage plot again. The protagonist wants to kill Xiao Yan, and every time Xiao Yan doesn't die, and there is still a chance. After more than ten chapters, it pops up again, giving the protagonist a beating, and then there is no chance. This kind of rubbish novel is completely stupid. The protagonist is made so vicious, but once you meet the protagonist, you will become a virgin bitch 🤭🤭🤭

I really don't understand why you have to deal with Xiao Yan? While despising Xiao Yan, I was doing even more disgusting things than Xiao Yan. I looked at other fans and found that they were all big stallions in the harem, which really made me vomit. Wouldn't it be nice to snatch Xiao Yan's ring and ignore him like some time-traveling novels?

The female character in Dou Po hates Gu Xun'er. Nalan Yanran is Xiao Yan's legal fiancée. She hangs out with Xiao Yan every day and makes it clear that she wants to be a mistress. Nalan even threatens to break off the engagement. Later, it is her family's turn to arrange for her to be with someone else. She does not use all means, and is much more ruthless than Nalan Yanran. She took all the family resources and contributed to the family. Turn your elbows outward

If you can't lick Xiao Yan, you must torture him! There are two ways to become an emperor: inheritance of strange fire (higher level), and emperor-grade young pill (lower level). Do you think you can get that by licking Xiao Yan? Inheritance of Strange Fire? Do you have any burning skills? Emperor-grade young pill? Are you better than Soul Emperor? Will Xiao Yan give you the Imperial Grade Young Pill if you get both? What can you get from licking Xiao Yan? Burn Jue? Without Yao Lao's help, can you recover the alien fire faster than Xiao Yan? What's more, will I burn you? The protagonist of the fan work has an irreconcilable conflict with Xiao Yan. Why don't you fight for the two opportunities to become emperor? Cutting off Xiao Yan's path allows you to develop and have a chance to become an emperor. After all, you can't cut off the way of the Soul Emperor, but you can cut off Xiao Yan's way, so it is necessary to torture Xiao Yan.

I'm not that resistant, so I slipped away.

Let me tell you, the peerless Tang Sect in Douluo Continent next door, and the protagonist of Dragon King Legend have all become women, did you know? Then they were very popular at first, but then they became eunuchs, and Dou Po Cang Qiong hasn't written about becoming a girl yet. If you write it, it should be very popular.

In my opinion, we must force Xiao Xun'er in front of Xiao Yan and finally kill her, and then destroy the ancient clan to avoid future troubles.

I hope Xiao Xun'er is not the heroine. In this book, I feel that the best heroine is Xiao Ling. The character design in the first few chapters is very lovable. As for the other female characters in the original book, I think they can be just a greenhouse girl at most. To be honest, I have seen countless times of running around and kneeling down to lick Xiao Xun'er, and I just don't understand. Are those authors so lacking in love? The main character is written as if he has never seen a woman before? In the early stage, when he opposed Xiao Yan and was targeted by Xiao Xun'er, he still kneeled down and licked him. I can only say that those authors are really 666.

It is said that the Soul Clan may not be that unbearable. It is said that the Soul Clan likes the soul body to be very scary and arrogant. The strong warriors of the Dou Huang freeze an entire city in anger. The strong men duel in densely populated areas. The rest of the powerful moves... Are only half a dozen. The big forces and the six clans certainly looked down upon and hated the Soul Clan and the Soul Palace. But I don't see them fighting life and death in normal times. Of course it is a matter of strength, but if they really want to mess with the Soul Clan, the Soul Clan will not feel comfortable, but this is not the case. It shows that at least what you do is above the bottom line. In the original book, the Xiao family was attacked by the Soul Palace, but the ancient clan did not show any help. One of them used an undercover agent, the other used direct violence. Even so, the Soul Clan did not completely wipe out the Xiao family, nor did they hunt down the remaining members of the Xiao family afterwards. It shows that there is some degree of restraint. The Ancient Clan didn't fart at all, and they felt guilty. The Ancient Clan was doing the first grade of junior high school, and the Soul Clan was doing the fifteenth grade. No one could blame anyone.

Cough, cough, since there is Xier, I can post a Bronya picture (I originally wanted to post a loli picture, but I couldn't find it)

When will it be updated? Why do good works always get discontinued?

Ahem... When I have money later, I'll find someone to draw one...

As for why I want Xiao Yan to die so much? Because the protagonist was tortured like this, and Ling'er was also miserable, then Xiao Yan, Gu Xun'er and the others must pay the price! Otherwise, after reading so many chapters and being made so uncomfortable by the abusive master, I feel unwilling to do so! Author, if you only abuse the main character and don't abuse the pseudo-protagonist, who else will read it? After all, not everyone reads all the novels about sadistic characters. Some of the novels about sadistic characters also have highlight moments for the protagonists! Originally, I thought the protagonist was going to start a counterattack during the coming-of-age ceremony, but you ended up abusing me again, even though you were not the protagonist.

The protagonist gets the plug-in and adds an unnecessary character like Ling'er. He repeatedly asks for trouble with the anti-inflammatory, and his bones are broken by Xiao Xun'er again and again. Since he can't get it, he first becomes the Dou Emperor and then steals it, which makes the plot collapse and eunuch.

I took it. Why keep such a disgusting anti-inflammatory? Why slap me in the face? Not much fun anymore

Author, you are poisonous, people from the Soul Clan have no bodyguards