Doupo's Holy Level System

Nalan Yanran did nothing wrong! Isn't it just an annulment? If you retreat, you will retreat. How many more years will his Xiao family live? Wasn't it also destroyed by the Soul Palace? What's wrong with calling off the engagement? What's wrong? What's wrong? Xiao Yan couldn't even save his family. There is absolutely nothing wrong with calling off the engagement.

Here is a brief review of the poison-testing beast. The main character is a bitch. First define the personality of the protagonist, lick the dog. The beginning is very ordinary, just like most Xiaobai's novels (to put it harshly, it is copied completely from the Xiaobai's template, without any sparkle). When I first met Xiao Yan, he started to lick it uncharacteristically. He also believed that Xiao Yan had an innocent heart by insisting on living under the eyes of others. I almost vomited. Is he worthy of his innocent heart? When I was little, I touched the little girl's body. When I got older, I touched Xiao Mei and Xiao Yu. Isn't this just a pervert? Later, there was the part about Fallen Heart Flame, saying to Medusa, you should fall in love with me if you go above and beyond. What is this? Isn't this just a pervert of one age plus nt? Secondly, breaking off the engagement is an essential and major event. Why does the protagonist stand up? With a system task? Let's not talk about anything else. Let's compare the two first. Xiao Yan vs Yanran strength comparison. The third stage of Dou Zhi Qi: Three-star Dou Zha (I almost forgot, I must remember it) background comparison. The small family of the Jiama Empire, one-third of the overlords of Wutan City: a high-ranking official of the Jiama Empire, and a direct disciple of the Yunlan Sect's leader, with the strongest combat power comparison. The Great Dou Master: Dou Huang just relied on the above three points and wrote a letter of divorce in public, which shows that his level of sexual harassment is not ordinary. In my opinion, Nalan Yanran's breakup of the engagement not only did not harm the Xiao family, but also preserved the Xiao family's reputation. Are phoenixes and chickens comparable? The power of your family cannot match the force of marriage, and the strength of your family cannot match it. How can you, Xiao Yan, have the nerve to say that breaking off the engagement is shaking the reputation of the Xiao family. After comparing the original work, let's talk about the protagonist of this book. It doesn't matter what you want in the early stage, so why should I listen to you? Secondly, I really didn't see any of the author's ideas and just followed the process. If the author really agrees with Xiao Yan's idea, then I have nothing to say. Personally, I think this should be the author's practice work, used to practice his writing skills. After all, novice writing is the easiest to write, but it is definitely not easy to write well. If the author can see it, I hope he won't give up. There is no such thing as a one-step success. If you don't practice writing and just want to become famous, there is absolutely no such thing. I wish the author will succeed in writing as soon as possible and get rid of this kind of NT white writing.

This profile is poisonous, right? Nalan Yanran just has this 21st century concept of equality for everyone, why should she be targeted like this? Xiao Yan is half-hearted and flirting everywhere, but he is still an uncle by nature. Are you embarrassed to be a wretched uncle?

To put it bluntly, many books these days start licking the protagonist as soon as they travel through time. Even if you are the God of Creation, you will come up and lick him. Why do you want you to travel through time?

To be honest, author, I personally feel very uncomfortable after reading your introduction. Of course, this is your work, just be happy with it. I personally think that there was nothing wrong with Nalan Yanran breaking off the engagement, it was just the wrong time! She didn't have the capital to break off the engagement before, so she didn't break off the engagement. But now, she has the capital, so she breaks off the engagement. I personally see nothing wrong with this. Let me ask the author here, if your parents made an engagement for you when you were a child! And your parents have been comparing her (him) to you since you were a child. From childhood to adulthood, they always talk about what you will think of your fiancé (e). Did you feel good about him at first? Still not good? Everyone must know it in their hearts, right? Besides, what's the use of a marriage that has no emotional basis since childhood? Is it to make one person sad or to make two people sad? So I personally think you should be more tactful when writing about breaking off the engagement. After all, she is a girl. Of course, I also read the introduction. I don't mean to ** it, I just don't like the introduction of your book. (After all, you are the author! This is also your book, I have no right to interfere )

No one is wrong to break off the engagement, the fault lies with you as a waste. If the protagonist is NB, others will not humiliate you. Even if you exterminate the family, no one will jump out and say you are wrong.

After reading your profile, I don't want to read anymore.

Phew, it makes me feel embarrassed. All comrades can watch it all are masters. . . .

Update

TM A person who traveled back in time in the 21st century can't break off the engagement. I'm so embarrassed. It's so embarrassing.

I think it was very wrong for Nalan Yanran to break off the engagement, because he broke off the engagement in front of many people, and he should have broken off the engagement in private. He insulted a man's dignity. Moreover, every man is vulgar and that is from ancient times and does not have the concept of the 21st century. So Nalan Yanran is a scumbag. She is a money-worshiping girl.