His Coffee

A cup of coffee can taste the charm of life in the midst of bitterness. There are always many unsatisfactory joys, sorrows and joys in life. I feel that the male protagonist in the article is both lucky and unfortunate. The author talks about arrival in a relaxed and realistic way, which I personally like.

I have to say that I really like this plain narrative method...! It is very readable, and it feels like there are no big ups and downs but there is an undercurrent. It's not a conspiracy, it feels very real, like reading a bedtime story in a low voice, woo woo woo woo... And the plot arrangement is also very good...! The initial bit of suspense was still half-suspended, and I was vaguely holding on to such a head, and then let it go and talked about it. Decided, I will update it from time to time. Come on, author! ! !

I like this writing style and look forward to the subsequent development of the plot.

Now it seems that the writing is very life-like, and I like this writing style very much. However, there are slight traces of carving in some places. After being optimistic, you will become more and more calm.

The writing style was a bit awkward at the beginning, but it got better and better later on. I think there are many arguments in it that are very good. I guess it's because I'm not yet proficient in writing novels? I ran to read the sequel again, but it was still a little unnatural. I guessed that the author was probably still a student, so he added some fantasy and poetry to the description (probably) In any case, this kind of narrative method was really rare at the beginning. There is something that may be called aura floating in the text. I wish the author a bright future. ps, on the one hand, I feel that the author does not have some of the life experiences contained in the article, and on the other hand, I feel that the author seems to have incorporated personal experience. What a contradiction. Perhaps semi-autobiographical? 🤔