The Fateful Cry of the Peerless Tang Sect

Because Wang Qiu'er and Huo Yuhao of Peerless Tang Sect are not together, I searched for fanfics of Huo Yuhao and Wang Qiu'er on Baidu. I thought they would be together when I saw the first part. But when I saw the ending, I felt an indescribable feeling, which was quite uncomfortable 😥

There are two extreme expressions of fan fiction, either igniting oneself through the fire of the original work, or being burned to death by the fire of the original work. Others often think that fan fiction is easy to write, but in fact it is not, because you have to add your own ideas to an already created world, which requires that your settings must be similar to the original. This is difficult, because it is either unoriginal or awkward. The best thing about writing fan fiction is reasonable interaction with the characters of the original work. This is very important. After all, it is a sentiment for fans of the original work. Come on.

It can be seen that the author is very careful in writing the text. For example, the time origin of an era is specially marked as being from "Journey to the West". And the action scenes are really good, I was so excited to see the scenes of the five ghosts carrying the coffin, the immortal emperor's earthly skills, and the battle between ancient gods. The most important thing is the foreshadowing plot of the conference. It doesn't look out of place at all when watching it before and after, such as the Golden Dragon King, the Golden Dragon Spear, and the Hymn of the Dragon God. After the plot comes out, there is a feeling of sudden enlightenment. Come on, I will always support you

Wow, new to the trap! The writing is very good, and most importantly, it's not cliché at all! The setting of Endless Void is very good! And this is the first time I see Wang Qiuer as the heroine. In fact, I think Wang Qiuer has a lot to explore. Things like the power of destiny and the golden dragon spirit are very interesting, right? Come on!

Ye Fan has been very happy recently. Because he found that Sister Qiu'er's relationship with Huo Yuhao, the "Unshaking Lotus", has been a bit cold recently. "Buyaolian" is the nickname he gave that bastard, which means "shameless". Every time he sees that bastard's depressed expression, he feels very happy. And he heard that Lotus slept on the sofa last night. That's right, because he saw that Lotus had a slight cold today, and he thought it was caused by the wind. Not only that, it is said that Buyaolian took the initiative to kneel on the washboard this morning. It felt very good to think about it... As for the reason, he still doesn't know yet. But no matter what the reason is, the "sleeping on the sofa" incident represents his opportunity. Sister Qiu'er is finally tired of the Unshakable Lotus, and his spring is coming! So tonight he happily opened a bottle of 1982 Lafite in the villa and enjoyed a candlelight dinner alone... Um, but it doesn't matter, soon a candlelight dinner for one person will become a heart-to-heart for two people. Tonight would be his last lonely candlelight dinner, he was sure of it. He decided that on the weekend he would take Sister Qiuer to his secret base on a private plane. Sister Qiuer will see the bright and beautiful fireworks there, the romantic and heartwarming dance of fireflies, and the 520 lilacs he carefully prepared. Looking back on the past, it was obviously him who met Sister Qiu'er first, and it was obviously him who fell in love with Sister Qiu'er first, but Sister Qiu'er just followed Huo Yuhao, the unshakable lotus. What's wrong with him? He wanted family background, talent, and money, and he was convinced that he loved Sister Qiu'er more than Bu Yao Lian. Huh... It doesn't matter. After tonight, everything will change. He was drunk, and he actually saw Sister Qiuer smiling in front of him. Sister Qiu'er rarely smiled. He was really drunk... He fell asleep on the sofa and had a beautiful dream.

Is the protagonist Qiu'er, Yuhao or Yefan? In my eyes, it's not, as if it is really just a story, a story that is still unfinished...

Not bad, not bad. It's like shit. The protagonist can be said to be a supporting role.

What does this book feel like? The protagonist liked Wang Qiuer in his previous life, so he is now guarding Wang Qiuer. Then Wang Qiuer, because of fate, fell in love with Huo Yuhao for some reason. Then, suddenly Wang Qiuer saw the protagonist's past life memory and found that the protagonist liked him. I also like the protagonist. Then the emotional scene between Wang Qiuer and Huo Yuhao ended inexplicably. (It describes Huo Yuhao and Wang Qiuer in a long way, and the protagonist only has memories of a past life) It feels like the protagonist is green, like a licking dog.

I dare not watch it. If the heroine is Wang Qiuer, I feel that the protagonist will be cheated sooner or later.

Inexplicably, I feel like you are completely here this time, even if I copied the original text here, I don't even know what the meaning of this kind of fanfic is.

Stop writing fanfics and just write original works! Protagonist and supporting role alike.

The word count is a bit short, but it's pretty good ^_^♪

Keep up the good work! The number of words was a little small at first, but now it is enough. The plot and writing are also quite good, but it could use more emotional interaction. 23333. We are also looking forward to a completely different plot from the original work in the later stages!

The new settings about the Dragon Clan are very novel and unique. Three thousand blood transform into the Dragon Clan, the Nine Royal Clan, the Nine Sons of the Dragon, and the Sumeru Realm are all very good (✪▽✪)

Is the male protagonist Ye Fan or Huo Yuhao?

Because more than one judge asked who the male protagonist is, I would like to make a solemn statement here. Perhaps readers feel that Ye Fan has a lot of scenes in the first few chapters, and the male protagonist Ye Fan follows the usual routine! However, I can only regretfully state that although Huo Yuhao only appeared in Chapters 5 and 6, he is the male protagonist by definition! Since Huo Yuhao's appearance, you will actually find that the mainstream of the plot has followed him ヽ('⌒´メ)ノ Of course, the role of Ye Fan is very important, and it can be regarded as a hidden thread running through the entire story. Readers can think that the bright line is Huo Yuhao and the dark line is Ye Fan, so the difference may not be too big. At the same time, readers may also find that many supporting characters are described at considerable length below. This can be regarded as an obsessive-compulsive disorder of mine - even if I am a passerby, I hope that I can explain clearly the cause and consequences. Finally, thank you readers for your support (´-ω-`) Your encouragement is the biggest motivation for me 🌹🌹🌹

I won't enter the palace anymore, author, don't scare me

I watched it because of Wang Qiuer and Huo Yuhao, but you gave me the whole ending. Some people said they were disappointed, and even tortured me again. Adding a male protagonist at the beginning would be a good way to avoid lightning for others. I originally wanted to read the extra chapter you wrote, but now I am really not in the mood. It's not that you are not good at writing, but most people in fan fiction are looking for comfort instead of torture of the original text.

When I saw this, I felt that Wang Qiuer was the heroine, not the protagonist. It was just two male protagonists (male supporting characters) competing for the heroine. But when I saw this, I felt that she and Huo were a couple. When I wrote about her and Huo, I was so blushing. It made me feel uncomfortable. I wrote the other male protagonist so miserable, but he is not. Being paired with the heroine, why do I have any doubts about him? There is no emotional drama or anything like that. It makes me feel so uncomfortable. Why is the heroine, the author's eldest brother, not with Ye Fan? I miss them so much. Why write about Huo Gua? If the male protagonist of the fan novel is the original one, it doesn't make sense. The author is great 😁. (I'm just talking about it casually, mainly because the author's writing is so good that I really thought the male protagonist was Ye Fan after I read it. This is the first time I've written something like this in a novel for so long. If you don't like it, just criticize it, hehe. 👍

Promise me not to cut the book. Okay? ? ? (≧∀≦)ゞ

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I have always liked Huo Yuhao, but the author created the image of Ye Fan so well in this book that the protagonist Huo Yuhao was very depressed.

Can you unleash Ye Fan's abilities? He already has nine rings, right? You seem to have only used the first six soul skills

I am very different from the author. I don't think Ye Fan is that miserable. Someone who has never even received a beating. You actually think he is miserable. . . . . . . And didn't you say that, the author? Why did Ye Fan end up with Wang Qiu'er when he only loved Ah Li? Huo Yuhao's "extreme" birth was of no use.

It's not that it was written in a weird way. I thought it was the love between Qiu'er and Yuhao based on the subject matter. But in the end, Wutong liked Yuhao, Yuhao liked Qiu'er, and Qiu'er liked Ye Fan. If that's not what you wrote, why did a monk stop Dong'er from participating in Poseidon's Fate in the early stages of Poseidon, thereby missing the acquaintance of Yuhao and Dong'er, and letting Qiu'er and Yuhao meet, but the final ending was that Ye Fan wanted to destroy everything (Tang San was like a witch in this book) Good guy) Tang San united all the god kings in the God Realm to lend their power to Yu Hao to fight Ye Fan. In the end, Qiu'er died for Ye Fan and was reincarnated to renew their relationship. So what's the point of stopping Dong'er in Poseidon? Do you want to disgust Dong'er and Yu Hao? You said the protagonist is Yuhao, but I think the protagonist is Ye Fan. He is better than Yu Hao in every aspect. In the end, Wutong likes Yu Hao, but Yuhao has no feelings for Wutong. Qiu'er, whom Yuhao likes, ran away with Ye Fan. Do you call this the protagonist? Please change the introduction to the love story between Ye Fan and Qiu'er from the "Power of Destiny" in another world. The writing is messy, with no distinction between priority and priority. He keeps saying that Yu Hao is the protagonist, but he is suppressed throughout the whole process, and the person he likes runs away with someone else. The most annoying thing is that I repeat: since you don't want Yu Hao and Qiu'er to be together again, you prevent Dong'er and Yu Hao from meeting each other in the early stage. What's the point of letting Qiu'er and Yu Hao get to know each other first? Do you want to write a bloody love triangle?

. . . . Author, didn't you say that Wang Qiuer was not attracted to anyone? Why did I see your update first? I felt speechless for a while.

The plot is somewhat the same as I expected. It wasn't Ye Fan who died in the end. It was he and Wang Qiuer who died together. However, the author may have changed Wang Qiuer's character a little too much here. If the plot of the original work were to be followed, Wang Qiuer would not mind his own business at all, and he should have been driven away when they first met, either by throwing him down or killing him.

All I can say is that if you dare to skip a chapter, you won't know what he is writing.

If you want to read this book, you should first understand that Ye Fan is the protagonist. It is probably about Ye Fan and others who prevent Dong'er from meeting Yu Hao on Poseidon, allowing Qiu'er and Yu Hao to meet, and making them fall in love. Dong'er has been in unrequited love throughout the play. In the end, Ye Fan snatches away Qiu'er, who Yu Hao likes. The ending is that Dong'er likes Yu Hao, Yu Hao likes Qiu'er, and Qiu'er likes Ye Fan (in this book, Tang San is considered a half-good guy, helping Yu Hao)

The Peerless Tang Sect fanfiction whose protagonist is Huo Yuhao will definitely not survive. Did you see that the book was about the original protagonist being popular?