I Promise You That My Everlasting Love Will Live up to This Life

Beautiful flowers

We are in deep love, and we will be together from now on!

Now that you've read this, don't you have anything to say to the author? I'm listening... Eh

Come on! Waiting for the follow-up article! The writing is delicate, I like it, cheer you up🌹🌹

Your little Ranran is as cute as you🎉🎉

I have only read the first ten chapters. The plot conflicts are very compact, and the writing skills are pretty good. There is a slight problem. The character creation is a bit too hard. Sometimes speaking in a higher voice is powerful, but it always feels a bit noisy.

First, the writing style is very good. There is no doubt about this. The description of appearance is also very good, and the psychological description is also good. Second, there is a slight flaw in the first chapter. When the male protagonist almost hit someone while driving fast, he thought that the other person was touching someone. Something was wrong. I felt that there was a little lack of description. That is why he thought the other person was touching someone. He couldn't just say that a five or six-year-old little sister reached out to him after almost being hit and said it was touching. (It can be from the side, that is, his psychological changes, or he has seen similar behavior somewhere before, or, recently, this kind of touching behavior has been common here, so he thought that the two people in front of him might be touching.) Because I think there is no such description, the first reaction is to think that others are touching, and it is the mother taking the child to touch. This is a bit one-sided and a little rude, although he later solved the misunderstanding. If the woman made it clear that she was hit by someone and had to ask for money, then I think there is nothing wrong with what he said. Otherwise, judging from what he said later, it would be a bit unreasonable. Third, the rhythm of this article is good. It starts with a contradiction, which can also attract people's attention. The rhythm is good.

This child is so cute. If I could meet such a child, I would love to pet her. The writing is very good, and various plots are well set up. I feel that the male protagonist can achieve top-level traffic. Even if his daily life is relatively monotonous, he should be more mature and social about many things. The car accident at the beginning and his treatment of the female protagonist will make you feel that he is a little young and impulsive. Everything else is very good! Love it, love it.

I'm here to hang out too. Come on.

Hi, here I come, take a seat first.

It's nice to look at. I caught a big treasure.