Qi Mei

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Now I know how to set up characters. Is there anything you like? Give me some love~

It will be released next Tuesday, and there will be a wave of excitement. Is anyone here to support it?

The writing is smooth and it is a good book. I have collected it! Come on update! Congratulations on the launch and welcome back to visit!

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The story is very interesting, the writing is also very good, and the suspense of getting married is very high at the beginning. Come on＾0＾~, take it

The original title of the book was "Second Master Lu's Little Wife". Because the overbearing CEO style was too obvious, I changed the name to a new one, hoping it would be a bit more classical (I am a bad namer, but the article will not disappoint you).

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It's well written, but has some shortcomings. 1 On the whole, the story is simple and boring, too bland and has no ups and downs. 2. The description of the character's personality and appearance should be more specific, and the narrative and emotional description should be more specific. The description of the character's dialogue can include appropriate psychology, eyes, movements, and descriptions; the description of the scene should be included. 3 The main line is clear, with a bit of suspense, ups and downs and conflicts, giving people a sense of generation. 4 This book mainly focuses on the protagonist, with the supporting roles as auxiliary. In fact, I made a mistake when writing the article. During the writing process, I wrote that the protagonist had fewer roles and the supporting roles had more roles. I later changed it after being reminded, but it was troublesome to revise it. 5. Don't be too monotonous in character dialogue, and pay attention to details. 6 Write what you should write, and don't write too much about what you shouldn't write. The author can read and recommend novels similar to ancient romance, and he can learn a lot from them. Take the essence and discard the dross. Looking forward to your chapter updates, come on, keep working hard, you have a lot of room for improvement, I have collected it, please return and collect it.

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Very good article, I will always support it

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