Take Control of the World of Naruto

Is it because the author is not sober, or because my taste has changed? 😅 If you ignore the factors that have already been established in the fan fiction, the dialogue and action descriptions of the characters here can be said to be quite embarrassing and absolutely unqualified. (Japanese homophonic memes are okay once in a while) As for the plot, there is actually nothing wrong with opening according to the original work, which makes it easier to substitute, but the author's writing style is too dramatic... If you can't even describe the storyline that others have established, let alone the original part behind it, no matter how good your idea is, you still can't write the feeling you want. The author's enthusiasm and love for Naruto are revealed between the lines of this book. I am also a Naruto fan, so I didn't want to write this to pour cold water on the author, but after thinking about it, I still feel that some words may be better said now.

After writing a few chapters, I boast that I am a fine writer.

Really, maybe the protagonist has never watched Naruto? Of no use? It's useless for you to call me Flying Thunder God?

I'll come back and comment after reading these chapters😂😂😂😂😂😂

After reading your novel, I was so scared that I quickly voted for it and added it to my collection.

I can't use any other adjective except "fuck"

After traveling through time, why is Naruto's character still the same? ? ? ?