Erqianran

I hope the author can reply to all my posts

Dear author, please listen to me and say that I must criticize you in some places. Are you willing to listen?

Keep at it, it's rare to find such good novels, and the starting point now is also some cool and mindless novels.

Boy, here I go again🙂

Support Well written! ! I really want to see the development of the plot later.

Is it more appropriate to practice writing and try out unit plays with different writing styles? If the outline has been determined, think of it as farting Also, can you read the poster first before recommending the book?

Is it more appropriate to practice writing and try out unit plays with different writing styles? If the outline has been determined, think of it as farting Also, can you read the poster first before recommending the book?

Is it more appropriate to practice writing and try out unit plays with different writing styles? If the outline has been determined, think of it as farting Also, can you read the poster first before recommending the book?

It felt a little rushed when it was finished, but it will be much better in the next step, come on💪

A paragraph is too long. Break it into more paragraphs. It's too tiring to read.

Come on, the author, come on (ง•̀_•́)ง

Damn, I took a look, please cut off the chapter first. It's so dense that it makes one dizzy to see it. I have no idea what is said in it. This is also the first impression and feeling as a reader. I hope it will be greatly improved. My personal suggestion is that if you don't like it, just delete it.

The writing style is very good, not exaggerated, and very steady. I persisted until I finished writing and gave myself an explanation 👍

Once you confirm the outline, you will think I'm farting Please read the original poster's requirements before recommending, bro...

Once you finalize the outline, you'll think I'm farting Also, can you read the post first before recommending the book? 🙂