My Days in Ilona

Article evaluation: Yes, the plot of the novel follows the main line of the game. The article is not popular, but it is barely acceptable. The content is not very attractive. I hope the author can practice his writing skills, so that readers can be immersed in the game instead of watching from a distance. :      1.，NPC， For example; the Asura tribe and the Slime tribe are the most impressive. There are also specific dungeons (Tauren nest, Dragon cellar)                                                                                                                                      Cellar                                                                                             The article can be slow, but cannot be superficial, the plot can have a large deviation, the game and the novel are not particularly consistent, and there are not many players. I hope to focus on writing some of the more exciting fighting scenes, as bland plots will affect the quality of the article.                    ——Tribute to the author {"TopicId":"575911170507276288","TopicName":"New Book Recommendation"}{"TopicId":"804728532092780544","TopicName":"The Terminator of the Book Famine"}

Why don't you write it? It's very good.

It's a very orthodox Elona fan novel. It would be better if 'I' could be replaced by 'Wang Shu'. I really can't get used to the first person.

Okay, there really is an Elona fanfic I'm going to write an Elona fanfic_(:з∠)_

Oh my God, there is an Elona. The childhood memories are so... Even though it is not the genuine Elona, ​​it is still an Elona after all.