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Because this is the first book that I will stick to, the writing style at the beginning is a bit poor 😢, but I will gradually change it later... Please support me a lot For the student party, writing is just a hobby, but it is a really big surprise that someone can like it. I just started, what's wrong, please give me more advice🙏

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง and encourage each other, the overall narrative and character dialogue are okay; the chapter content is a bit empty, and the paragraphs should be appropriate. Do not use short sentences all over the body. Occasionally short sentences and long sentences (of course, not too long sentences, otherwise they will appear abrupt) may increase the reading sense! Don't stop updating, and don't rush to increase the word count. Write the content and theme in the early stage, and then increase the word count after slowly attracting readers. It has been added to the subscription collection. I will see it later. Come on (^~^).