Imagine the Restricted Area

Advantages: 1. Great imagination 2. The content is well connected 3. It can be seen that there is some foreshadowing 4. The creativity is good 5. The twist is good, the plot is not like that kind of overly sophisticated novel, you can guess it at a glance. Disadvantages: 1. Meeting a beautiful woman and forcibly reducing her wits 2. The dark side of society is too obvious, and obviously of no great use to the novel. It is better to put this kind of thing in an incident and explore it in depth, rather than disappearing like this description, no connotation can be read, and all you feel is disgusting. 3. There are really not many people with brains, and most of them are women, and there is always a feeling that they will become the mistress of the male protagonist in the next second. 4. The description of the entire worldview is too vague, and I always feel that this world, except for the world that the protagonist can see, is all dark. 5. The author expresses too many emotions. Just put it in the text and let the readers understand it through one thing. 6. The inner description of the characters is either sparse, or it is just like reading comprehension, analyzing the character's personality, giving people the feeling of watching a puppet show. Characteristics are best expressed through events, otherwise it will be uncomfortable if subsequent events conflict with the character directly written by the author. 7. The protagonist gives me the impression that he is a * character, a psychological * character. I don't need him to be a person with high EQ and IQ, but I just want him to be mentally stronger than normal people and have some EQ and IQ.

That's it? That's it? The beginning is not very attractive 😥

The pace is good, it feels like reading a novel ten years ago

It's just a silky man's character, I'm convinced

To be honest. I know why you haven't signed it yet, but I think you've chosen the wrong area. Why would you choose fantasy for this subject? Isn't it great to invest in light novels?

The plot is too old-fashioned, with too few highlights and too many flaws. The old author is okay, but it is difficult for a new author to get ahead!

It feels like a novice novel from a few years ago. It doesn't require much IQ. The protagonist is talking and talking. The protagonist is different from modern people. He looks like a bumpkin from a big city.

How dare you write a book and post at the starting point.

The water in the police station can flood people, but no one thinks there is a problem. They just say that the water pipe is broken and the drainage system is not good. If you think there is a sudden flood, I can understand it, but how can anyone understand it like this? Apart from feeling weird, there is no possibility of encountering mysterious events. It feels like they all have the same Xerox character 🙂

I have something to do today, just one chapter for now. I hope you all can support me.

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The plot is very attractive, even I feel nervous and my heart is pounding

The new book is really exciting and exciting. It's so beautiful. I already like it so much that I can't describe it in words. What I like most about this book is its storyline. It can be said that fantasy stories themselves have a lot of uncertainty. You can write whatever you want with your imagination, so I can't read fantasy themes. I am young, but this is the first time I have come across a plot like this in this book. It is exciting, interesting and imaginative. I was completely attracted by just a few chapters. It can be said that the author has written the opening chapter very successfully. First, he describes a murder case in a short text, which makes people feel upset. But at the same time, he is curious about whether the real culprit has been found in the murder case at the beginning? Then I wanted to continue reading, and then entered the plot step by step. The author also succeeded in making the male protagonist look like he was a failure. I felt like I hated the iron. In my opinion, the male protagonist's failure in the first half of his life was because his heart was higher than the sky, but he did not accept his fate. The kind of perseverance and perseverance that makes people successful, he is never afraid of failure, but becomes more courageous with every setback. However, the male protagonist Yuan Kerou began to escape from failure after failure, so he became what he is now. And it was such a person who was on the fringes of the writer's circle who met the most unfavorable person. Unbelievable things, the show started, and I couldn't stop, especially the deep alley in the middle of the night itself was scary, and a woman who looked like a ghost story suddenly appeared. How could I not stand on end, but a man is a man, how can he resist a beautiful woman when he encounters lust, so he was almost killed. The appearance of Shota's child reverses the plot and makes people confused. What is going on? It's too fantasy for a beautiful woman to fight Shota to the death. Things have become unreal. Not only the protagonist, I am also a little confused. Are these unreal things real or fake? The bar toilet confirms that the plot of the story is developing in an interesting direction. What reason do I have to give up the book after seeing this? It must be Chui Chui Chui; Shota's reappearance is completely inconsistent with his image. The look of him sucking skewers in his mouth made me laugh inexplicably. It made me want to jerk off skewers. Then he appeared in front of Yuan Kerou again, which made me laugh. Du felt that they were destined to have something to do with each other. Unexpectedly, Shota transformed and left again, and asked Yuan Kerou to ask for blessings. In the end, she really asked for blessings. Yuan Kerou became a murder suspect and made her want to cry. No tears, I feel sad for him. If he knew that going to the toilet would lead to so many things, I probably wouldn't even kill him, haha. When Deputy Director Li appeared, I saw that he was short-lived. As expected, I was shocked by the short-lived one. The most shocking thing was that he died under his own fantasy character. Life is really like a drama. But after seeing this, I completely understood the story I wanted to write in this book. I have to admit that it is true. It's a very novel idea, and the author's plot connection and plot development are unexpectedly good, and the pacing is also good. It's not impatient, interesting, and attractive. It's really a good book worth reading. The key point is that it's good to read. Now it introduces the story about the police saving Yuan Kerou's hidden imagination. How can you not love it? The only thing I hope is that the author will hurry up and update it. Come on, great!

The description of the setting is not clear enough. I can see in a fog. I suddenly pull out a pill from the wound. What does Shota mean when he saves the protagonist? I thought that after saving the protagonist, what kind of abilities will he give to the protagonist? When did this fantasy start? Why hasn't it happened before? Has the protagonist encountered strange things before? The emotional scene is so awesome. After saving my life, I feel like I am dying of love.

It's too cool, I just want to make money.

I wonder if you spent money, why do you have so many collections 🙂 I am so jealous that I want to carve you with my head 😏

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The police station is filled with seawater and there is a 7.8-Meter-long shark. It's amazing. How wide is the door of the police station? Are there no windows in the bureau? Can't you just knock on the window and run away? How many of you are there in a bureau?

After reading the first chapter, I found that the author's knowledge reserve is very large and broad. This book is indeed like most other books. But you are too reluctant! It's not like there are so many adjectives, modifiers, and four-character idioms in one sentence! Some authors read books for stories, but you have so many good words and sentences in one sentence. In this way, I will think that you are showing off your knowledge instead of seriously making up and telling stories. It's not easy to think of so many good words and sentences, it's amazing!

You are about to stop updating for seven days. Hurry up and send a chapter asking for leave.

Has anyone seen the latest chapter? Could you please let me know~